awesooommmmeeeee awesome lighting .. nice reflection uhmmm the floor in the hallway looks a little weird because the pattern stops buuut its fine oooh and the please do not tap on glass sign is cool .. did you make that ?
i guess the only thing that could make your art better is uhmm like .. perspective angles and stuff color is fine because you want people to focus on the octogirl and not on the rest of the image
oh and it still kinda misses that punch but i guess thats fine cause its a story drawing thingy..
oh there is 1 spelling error .. you wrote happended ^^
overall i'd say ... ITS FUCKING AWESOME AND DONT LISTEN TO ME CAUSE IDK WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT
p.s. except for the spelling error thingy ^^