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If this is a dream, then let me not wake.
Is she just a reflection on a sleeping lake?
Or could I see her with my very own eyes
Lest she discards her sleeping disguise?

I see her now, and she gives me peace.
Undoes my shackles, offers me release.
Closing my eyes I begin to dream
Of the maiden lake that I had once seen.
Uhm.

Yeah.

I really had no idea what I was trying to write this one. >> There's no ulterior motive to convey, no deep emotional feelings here - I used it as an exercise in an attempt to bring my mind back to writing in general.

Has it worked?
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Aprilweredragon Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
Me likey, very sweet:3.
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LittleEnky Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
WHY DO I READ OTHER PEOPLES COMMENTS?!?

Because you abandon'd me, why? =<
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
Stop spammmmmmmmming. >>
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LittleEnky Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
You stop spamming yourself first!! D=
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JalessiaJ Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Professional Artist
Nice =)
Already thinking of Valentine's Day, huh?
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
Tshhh. X3 I can see how you'd think that, but no ~ This was originally supposed to just be an exercise in poetry to get me back into the swing of things. You're not the first person to interpret that way though. X3
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Flow-the-Witch Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
its short and simple yet fantastic. good work.
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
Thank you very much. :)
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Flow-the-Witch Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
its true
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supersysscvi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
Huh... for some reason, I like it.
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
=)
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MutouMiriku Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
Oooooh, I likes! X333
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
X3 Thanks Miri ~
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kittykoolkatz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010  Student Filmographer
your writing and poetry never stops amusing me :D this is beautiful but it makes me wonder..

is their a girl you like Necron? :iconawwloveplz:
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
Thanks Lisa. :3

And no, I don't think so. ^^; This poem was just random ~
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kittykoolkatz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Student Filmographer
awww ok :D
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LittleEnky Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
A girl he likes? Oh no, he's in love with me.

For some reason I turned into a girl *nods nods*.

Here's to hoping Wakie doesn't read thisssss~
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
Wtf.
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:iconlittleenky:
LittleEnky Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
<3!!

ILU!!

Wheres your S4 man?!? >:C
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:iconnecron-cheese:
Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
<3 <3 <3

It's in a box, I'm busting it out later.
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LittleEnky Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2010
That reminds me, you owe me money.
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blackstarodysseus Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
ooh, that's really good ^^

:+fav:
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
:) Thanks Alaina ~
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blackstarodysseus Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
no prob ^^
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