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Heartbeat fails, blood to ice,
The makings of pride and avarice.
Do it again, seal a fate,
First their name, then the date.

Then the method, make it right,
Make it suit their sin and crime.
For you are just, your word is law,
Your power strikes all, rich and poor.

You're unseen, a phantom hand,
Your reach stretches over all the land.
Take the pen, open book,
Let no crime be overlooked.

You are God, let all bow down,
Your book and mind, scepter and crown,
None can stand against your will,
Those who try
You will kill.
Based on a popular manga and anime series.

Thank you, Captain Obvious.

A contrast to the recent fluffy poems, I know. X3 Forgive me ~
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LucasCAPS Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013   Writer
Simple and effective.

BTW, if you like Death Note, you'll probably like Code Geass.
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PikaDiety Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2010
XD Death Note= Win.

But seriously, that's a great poem. I got to the second verse and I just stopped reading to favorite.XD Then I went back and finished.XP I love the second verse especially.<3
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Thank you very much. ^^
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PikaDiety Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
Your welcome.^-^
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Aprilweredragon Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010
Love it love it love it!!!:D
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Flow-the-Witch Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
love the poem
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010
Thank you, and thanks for the :+fav:. :)
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Flow-the-Witch Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
ur welcome :D the death note series is an awsome anime
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Rainbowgal Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Jeez, I wanna make a song out of this...
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Feel free to do so! :)
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JalessiaJ Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Professional Artist
Ah, Death Note. That series seems to inspire everyone who watches or reads the manga.
You are forgiven. I like your dark poems =p
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Necron-cheese Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
^^;; Thank you ~
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