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[COMISSION] Happy by nechin [COMISSION] Happy by nechin
"I am really happy... and youu ? ~"
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Comission for and lovely OC belongs to Saracaa <3

I fell in love with my new art style >~<... // i took 3 days with breaks... ; v ;;


I hope ya like it !
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I like this art style right here, I really do, anime is one of my favorite types of art. But let me can the sugar-coating and let's get down to business.

First thing : Proportion. After a bit of studying this picture I'm going to classify it as 'Chibi', due to the cute arms and legs, squashed torso, and bubble-head. I hope that is what you were going for, or else what I'm about to tell you will not apply. Although, in almost all types or realistic or abstract art, unless you're purposely avoiding it, the legs are indeed thicker that the arms. But in this case, I feel as if the legs are way too thick. Feet? Great. Ankle? Good enough. Calf? Uh...a little too big. Thigh? Is she supposed to have all the fat there? If you can fick the legs a bit, that would make the whole body far more proportional.

Next : Shading. Your shading is impeccable here, I will credit you that, but what are you using? Cell shading or gradual shading? In some places there is cell shading, such as the neck and legs and forearms, but in other places such as the hair, hands and clothes are gradual shading. It's not a bad look, in fact it makes the overall appeal much more vibrant in ways, but me being a perfectionist, I just wanted to get that out of the way. Don't worry about it.

Proceeding : Reflection of light. Now there are a few spots here and there where I feel as if the lighting doesn't make sense. I understand that the light is coming from the front, but then, what about those reflections on top of the hair? They indicate light from above, and so that brings the question of why the shading isn't made to fit that light source. And you see those hair ties atop of her head too? Some indicate that the light is coming from BELOW, while others take the light from in front.

I hope this critique helped you at least a bit. Have a nice day!
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Vision :star::star::star::star::star-half:
I like this piece for the color palette you used - it's very eye-catching. The orange-blue complementary colors are used in the correct places to attract the viewer to the chibi's face. Good job! Furthermore, you were careful in handling the complementary colors such that it did not clash together. Thumbs up!

Originality :star::star::star::star:
Good to know that you like your new style! However, I've seen similar chibi styles like this before done by other artists, so I wouldn't consider this entirely original. But I do understand that all art styles have to stem from somewhere - we'll have to wait for you to develop this style even further, and add your own original touches to it. On another note, her character design is well done! I loved how you used an interesting texture to make the bows/ribbons on her head more attractive. I haven't really seen other artists use that texture before. :3

Technique :star::star::star::star-half:
I'll be talking about your coloring technique here~ I like how you tried to make the eyes appear more real by blending in the edges of the irises and pupils. However, careful not to blend too much and make the eyes look muddy! I think you did a decent job with the blending here - though that opinion could differ from person to person. Well, since this is a new style you're trying out, i suppose you do need more time to perfect it and tweak it here and there. :D Oh yes, and the shadows inside the eyes look a little too dark; its hard tell the difference between the eye whites and the irises.

Impact :star::star::star::star:
Overall, I think this chibi is a job well done. Her character design, color scheme and pose all add to the vibrancy of the artwork. But maybe you could make her smile? She does look like she's dancing, so I guess she should be smiling..? Hehe im not so sure, but I do look forward to your next few artworks~ :meow:
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Dreams-Shimmer Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2016  Student Artisan Crafter
AHHH SO CUTE!! How much??
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miiaro Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
Such a cute style! I love how you colour eyes, pls teach mee omg cry 
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ahhh quq thank you !

look at my latest tutorial i made >u<
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:iconjiko-jiko:
jiko-jiko Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015
This art is so sugoi desuKujou (Hng) Misc Emoji-12 (Stars 2) [V1] 
I want to touch itIcon - 012 Kyuto (Sparkle eyes) Sparkle 
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ahhh thank you ! ; v;; 
//touches ° A °
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:iconjiko-jiko:
jiko-jiko Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
Your welcome ^ 7 ^ !~
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x3Lielliax3 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
hör auf so toll zu sein ;w; <3
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ich kann doch nichts füüüür ; 3 ;; <3
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45GunsAndaRope Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just too kawaii!!*squeals*
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ahh thank youuu !! ; A ;; //crais
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45GunsAndaRope Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*pats head* Welcome!~
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ReinAkira Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
She's so cute! The coloring is beautiful!
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
thanks ! >u<
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Saracaa Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist
:iconpapcryplz:
my god

YASUUUUU YOU PRO SENPAIII YOUUUUU AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!~~~ <3333 ;A;;;;;;///
THIS IS ABSOLUTLEY BEAUTFIUL GAH I CAN'T EVEN GAHHH <33 //FAINTS 

:iconcraiplz: //wheezes 

GAH This new art style is so lovely bbu and omg they way you drew Fleur I can't 
even begin to describe how I love this so much like omg her pose is just so on 
point and the details on her clothes and ribbons gah it's all so perfect!!~ uwu

And mann I'm so happy I got to see her in your style cause my goodness you drew
her so well!!~ <33 //I can't get over the eyes man like gosh you draw eyes so lovely <333

Thank you so so much bbu!!~ <33 I love it to bits!!~
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nechin Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
AHHHHH IM SOOO GLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD YOU LIKE IT BBU !! ; v ;;;; 

I wanted to draw your other oc cotton too.. (i have done the sketch huehue)

NAAHhh and glad you like my new art stylee !! ; 3 ;;; 
// i try  to draw mor softly .. ahahahahhaha ...Crazy Jensen 
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Saracaa Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Hobbyist
WAHH I LOOOOOOOVEEE IT BAB KLAJDHSlGKASJDH <3333
//GAH SRSLY OMG //:iconblushuplz: 
Ur new style is simply gorgeous like gah so pretty <33 
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Student Digital Artist
AHHH THANK UU BABUUU ; A ;; !! 

// i worked so hard to improve my art style -- //crais
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Saracaa Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist
YOU'RE WELCOME BAB!!~ <33 ;;A;;;

//your hard work payed off //pats you~ 
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ahhh ; A ;;
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fanastyfinder Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
so stinkin cute!
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
thaanks ! >u<
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Rev-blackdragon Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing! i love that detail...! La la la la 
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ahh thank you very much ! >u<
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Rev-blackdragon Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes your welcome..!^^
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Yamoh Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
That's adorable <33
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nechin Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
awww thanks ! ; v ;;
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yrnblc Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
celebrate Shut up! Grito Kiss Selena Gomez Gif-Icon yes Food Oh well 
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:iconnechin:
nechin Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
too much selena gomez --
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