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The Abandoned Mine
Chapter 1 the beginning
On what seemed like a normal day I got a call telling me that there was an abandoned mine that was known for it's creepy atmosphere and weird noises there. it was too good to pass up so I went as quick as possible as I got to this place it looked like it had been abandoned for a while. I looked around and only saw trees and cars “well this place looks… creepy” I said *owl hooting* “AH what was that? It sounded like an owl well better see what’s in this abandoned mine” so I walked in
As I was walking in I started feeling even more creeped out by this old place and then too make matter’s worse I heard an ear piercing scream “who was that? I should find out” I said so I went in the direction of the scream “well I have no clue where the sound came from” I said but then I heard a very eerie growl “what was that?” I said then I heard heavy footsteps coming towards me “oh no I better find somewhere to hide unless I want whatever that is to kill me” I said I managed to find an old mine cart to hide in. The heavy footsteps got closer then they stopped... and started to fade away“phew I hope I never run into that thing again” I said so I got out of the mine cart and carried on “man it’s starting to get dark better get my flashlight out” I said *click* and walked more then I heard a loud bang “whoa what was that?” I said then I heard an eerie voice saying “Nathan… Nathan….” “How do you know my name” I said then the voice stopped “what the hell is going on in this place and how did the voice know my name? Better get my camcorder ready just in case” I said so I got my camcorder out and hit the record button.

Chapter 2 Voices
I walked further into this place and then heard voices sounded like talking  “what’s that how is anyone else down here this place is abandoned” I went closer to the talking and saw two people talking to each other “hello? What are you doing down here?” I said then the two people look at me and creepily   walked towards me “lo-look I don’t want any trouble” I said and then the two people vanished “what the… where did they go? Well better keep moving” I said so I went deeper into the mine and then heard the heavy footsteps again “Oh god not again” I said I tried finding something to hide in and the heavy footsteps got closer and louder “oh no” I said and then luckily I found what looked to be a locker so I hid in it. I made sure my camcorder was on so I could see what it was then I saw a big creature “what is that? I so don’t want to run into it now” I said then the heavy footsteps faded once again and I got out of the locker and moved through the mine and came to a junction and one sign said cafeteria and the other supplies. I decided to go with the supplies sign not knowing what would be in there.

Chapter 3 the supplies room
As I walked in the direction of the supplies room I found a metal door that was rusted “great it’s rusted how am I going to get into the supplies room now? There must be something to open this door with?” I said so I looked around trying to find something to open the door with then I found a old cutting torch “this should help” I said  I used it on the  door but it attracted unwanted attention then I heard the same heavy footsteps “oh great now I need to a place to hide” I said so I looked around to find someplace to hide and found another mine cart to hide in so I kept quiet till it was gone “right time to open the door” I said so I opened the door and went inside  I decided to search the supplies room to see if I could find anything  I found a couple of batteries for both my flash light and camcorder but couldn’t find anything else so I left the supplies room and went back to the junction and decided to go to the cafeteria this time “hopefully the door won’t be rusted this time” I said.
Chapter 4 the cafeteria
I saw the door to the cafeteria and to my amazement it wasn’t rusted
So I opened the door and entered the cafeteria It was  dark and stanked very badly  as I looked around I saw a body “well he’d been dead for a while probably explains why this place is abandon did that monster kill this guy? Well I won’t find anything in here other than rotten food" i said so i exited the room and went back to the junction then i notice there was a door that i hadn't seen.  the door said keep out private  in big bold letters so i did what any person would do i went to go and open the door and heard the monster again "oh no the monster again i better find answers though this door" i hid behind an old minecart and heard it sniff the air like it knew i was there but it went away.

chapter 5 the private room
so i entered the door and in there was a staircase leading downwards.
"hmm.. stairs wonder where these go" i said and went down.
"man so glad i have this flashlight" i said
so i ventured down and when reaching the bottom i heard a door slamming *slam*  *looked up to notice the door at the top was shut*"great now i'm now locked in here well i might aswell see what's in this room" i said so i searched and found some documents about weird experiments with animals and that one subject had escaped "oh.. god.. so that thing is an expirament? great just what i need" i said then suddurnly i heard a bang at that door that slamed shut "oh crap is that the monster"  then the door slamed off its hinges and the monster entered the room "oh no its gonna kill me" i said but it didn't see me and i managed to get out of the room without it noticing me "phew now i just have to get out of this place but which way do i go?" i said i had forgottan where i came into the mine then i heard the monster it was right behind me "oh god i've gotta run" i said  so i ran the monster closely catching up i hid behind something and luckly it lost me "thank god it lost me right now i gotta find me a way out " i said i kept walking and then i saw daylight shining from a hole in the wall "oh i remember now this is where i came in" i said so i went though the hole and left the abandoned mine although i could never forgot what happend at the abandoned mine.

The End  

The abandoned mine
By Nathan Lilley    
 
     
           
    also if any one read whole thing thank you :D 

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hi i'm Nathan i'm 18 love music and gaming and i edit images when i want and i'm currently at college. i play the piano self taught and i'm single.

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Mayeru Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Screenshot 3 by Mayeru  
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nayster24 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2017
you're welcome man :) 
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Jhincx-Faust Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot for the watch! really appreciate it! here's a watch back, and keep up the awesome works ! :D
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you're welcome mate and thank you :) appreciate it :)
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Thank you so much for the watch!! Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] 

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you're very welcome :) 
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BenGrunder Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the watch
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nayster24 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2016
no problem you're welcome :) 
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Thanks by GoddoArt  
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you're welcome :) glad to help 
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