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nattrozanska

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My Bio
I write a lot, or at least I'm supposed to. I get distracted easily, mainly by the internet. I like people. I love that everyone has a story to tell and I love hearing them. I love travel, culture and experience. I hate that I don't have any of the above. I like friendliness. I love random strangers pulling you out of dire straights when the don't have to, and I love kind words. I love community spirit and coming together. I love meeting new people. I love familiar faces. I love friends, family, acquaintances and relationships. I love real characters. Characters of any sort. I love the difference in opinion on personal quality of life. I love to listen and absorb. A lot fascinates me.

Favourite Visual Artist
Miranda July, Marina Abramovic, Banksy, Inkie
Favourite Movies
The Secret Garden, Legend, Into the Wild, Almost Famous, Howl
Favourite TV Shows
Farscape, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Firefly, Game of Thrones
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Ben Howard, Deftones, Tool, PJ Harvey, Patti Smith, Elfin Saddle
Favourite Books
Jane Eyre, What I Was, Jamaica Inn, Looking for Alaska, The Fault in Our Stars, How I Live Now, On the Road, Wuthering Heights
Favourite Writers
The Brontes, Daphne du Maurier, Meg Rosoff, John Green, Gabriel Gadfly, David Eddings, Anais Nin, Jack Kerouac
Favourite Games
Elder Scrolls, FF7
Favourite Gaming Platform
PS3
Tools of the Trade
Felt-tips, books and knives
Other Interests
Words, People, Stories

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Thank you so much, this is a really thoughtful and encouraging critique.
In regards to the sentence you picked out, in my first draft I had it phrased as 'But the one flaw in my plan was you', which didn't flow at all when I read it back, as I'd spent the beginning rambling on about 'you', only to suddenly introduce it as almost a new concept or idea with the way that sentence was laid out, I thought anyway, so it ended up being switched around, with the 'you' focus at the beginning, as if continuing the stream of thought. Or whatever. Sorry if that doesn't make sense, I'm a little drunk.
But anyway, thank you so much for this critique, and I can't express how happy I am that you enjoy it so much to return to it so often, I have pieces I do that with and appreciate what it says about a piece <2

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Thanks so much for the fave =)
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Thanks so much for the fave =)
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Thanks so much for the fave =)