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Happy B-Day Kagekao! by NatiArcanine Happy B-Day Kagekao! :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 2 1 Goretober - Day 20 - Inner Beauty by NatiArcanine
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Goretober - Day 20 - Inner Beauty :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0
Goretober - Day 19 - Eye Trauma by NatiArcanine
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Goretober - Day 19 - Eye Trauma :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 1 0
Goretober - Day 18 - Bones Sticking Out by NatiArcanine
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Goretober - Day 18 - Bones Sticking Out :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0
Goretober - Day 17 - Electrocution by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 17 - Electrocution :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 2 0 Goretober - Day 16 - Obsessed by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 16 - Obsessed :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 1 0 Goretober - Day 15 - Nosebleed by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 15 - Nosebleed :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 1 0 Goretober - Day 14 - Bruises by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 14 - Bruises :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0 Goretober - Day 13 - Insects by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 13 - Insects :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0 Goretober - Day 12 - Let the blood stream by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 12 - Let the blood stream :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 3 2 Goretober - Day 11 - Scratches by NatiArcanine
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Goretober - Day 11 - Scratches :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0
Goretober - Day 10 - Hanahaki by NatiArcanine
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Goretober - Day 10 - Hanahaki :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0
Goretober - Day 9 - Infected by NatiArcanine
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Goretober - Day 9 - Infected :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 2
Goretober 7 - Transformation by NatiArcanine Goretober 7 - Transformation :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 0 0 Goretober - Day 6 - Drowning by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 6 - Drowning :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 1 0 Goretober - Day 5 - Hey Batter Batter by NatiArcanine Goretober - Day 5 - Hey Batter Batter :iconnatiarcanine:NatiArcanine 1 1

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#Kris #EyelessJack #TicciToby #KageKao #Kross by Master-Irina97 #Kris #EyelessJack #TicciToby #KageKao #Kross :iconmaster-irina97:Master-Irina97 92 6 Scp 049 by Ninnydoodles Scp 049 :iconninnydoodles:Ninnydoodles 695 68 SCP - 049 by MolotovGTM SCP - 049 :iconmolotovgtm:MolotovGTM 792 57 SCP's by 7greenTears SCP's :icon7greentears:7greenTears 306 31 SCP-049 Plague Doctor by DeluCat SCP-049 Plague Doctor :icondelucat:DeluCat 544 31 Nargacuga the Swift Wyvern by Jinbeizamezama Nargacuga the Swift Wyvern :iconjinbeizamezama:Jinbeizamezama 91 2 Sally and Mr.Death by Lynnarty Sally and Mr.Death :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 33 3 You look like me! by Lynnarty You look like me! :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 65 11 Dont touch me again ! by Lynnarty Dont touch me again ! :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 81 16 Zootopia version: Slenderman, Ticci Toby, EJ by Lynnarty Zootopia version: Slenderman, Ticci Toby, EJ :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 41 12 Surprise by Lynnarty Surprise :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 53 8 Jeff and Jane: Zootopia version XD by Lynnarty Jeff and Jane: Zootopia version XD :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 28 4 The old cabin by Lynnarty The old cabin :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 82 6 Like a wolf by Lynnarty Like a wolf :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 40 3 Someone is watching by Lynnarty Someone is watching :iconlynnarty:Lynnarty 67 12

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I hope you like it and remember that criticism is accepted

Sorry for my English

I tried not to be a cliché as lately all the
Creepypastas are cliché

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Eyeless Jackie

Origin




Jackeline A 16-year-old girl, her friends described her as sympathetic and sometimes daring.

She had friends she had never suffered bullying or harassment, her parents or any of her relatives hurt her.

One day when Jackeline was six years old he discovered something he was going to understand over time, his parents were organ dealers.

Jackie having the age of 6 years did not understand what was happening, her parents tried to explain, but still did not understand, but over the years she would understand.

One day Jackie at the age of 16 was leaving school with one of her friends, Madison.

-Madison: Hey Jackie


-Jackie: Yes?


-Madison: In very little will be your 17 birthday, you will make a party?


-Jackie: I do not plan to make a party, I just want to blow the candles and eat cake with my parents, I'm sorry


-Madison: Don't worry, I understand, also children we have to have time for parents, don't you think?


-Jackie: Yes...


After talking and walking for a while, Jackie and Madison had to separate, as usual, to go home.

Jackie when she gets home greets her parents and sits next to them for lunch.

-Mother: Ready for the last class?


-Jackie: Last?


-Mother: Yes, I think you're ready enough


-Jackie: But...


-Father: is something wrong?


-Jackie: I still do not want to devote to that


-Father: Do not worry daughter, we are not hurrying. Your mother is only preparing you.


Jackie's mother had been a surgeon and knew enough about it, so she taught her daughter. Her parents wanted her to be ready so that in the future she would also be involved in organ trafficking, as her parents made a living out of it.

After lunch and Jackie's last class, the next few days were like everyone else, except on November 7th, her birthday.

It was November 7th, a Friday night, that day would be the last day for Jackie and her parents.

It was 9 pm, the small family had already dined and prepared to prepare the cake for his daughter to blow those little candles that showed a 17. The mother was about to light the candles when suddenly a strong blow was heard at the entrance.

The father got up, the mother was a little terrified and grabbed Jackie's arm and hugged her, Jackie was very confused, didn't understand what was going on, how could a birthday go wrong? her birthday.

The father placed himself in front of his wife and daughter. Then entered 4 men dressed in black, one had a metal lever, another a metal bar and the other two were not armed.

These men belonged to a somewhat-known mafia, they had discovered Jackie's parents.

Then one of the men snatched Jackie out of her mother's arms, she and her parents were struggling, one of the men gave Jackie a blow leaving her insconciente, then gagged her and tied her hands and feet.

Jackie woke up and saw her parents on their knees, gagged in front of her, amid the men's, they set out to open their stomachs, the men wanted to make them suffer so that they knew what some of their relatives had felt, Jackie did not want to Look, he didn't want to see how his parents died in front of her, but they forced her, forced her to look, the other two men opened her eyes well as she cried, could not scream, could do nothing, just cry and see the cruel death of her parents being gutted and The day of his birthday.

The parents were already dead there was only the poor daughter, Jackie. The men approached her, untied her, and removed the gag while she, panicked could only cry, the men grabbed her hard.

-Man 1: What if we give him a gift?
 Since today is apparently his birthday.


-Man 2: What a good idea


One of the four men approached this and arranged to remove his eyes with a knife, Jackie cried and screamed from the pain. 

She was tortured while she was dying of pain and bled to death. A few minutes ago the men realized that she was already dead, left the body without life and took the parents of Jackie.

Jackie suddenly could breathe, she didn't have an explanation for that and she got up, turned around and saw her lifeless body, she was a ghost, a soul in grief.

I was anxious to kill, to make vengeance. I seek and seek the trail of his assassins cost him but he found them, those four men who had finished with his life and that of his parents on the day of his 17 birthday.

I wanted to kill them. With his eagerness to kill he pounced upon them, the terrified men did not understand what was happening, then Jackie began to gut them with his fangs and teeth, every piece of flesh, blood and organ he felt inside his mouth was satisfactory to her , she had gone completely insane.

After collecting vengeance and eating the flesh and organs of those men she vanished into the darkness.

The friends and family of that little family never knew what happened to them to do that to him.



THE END








Creator: NatiCattieGamer // NatiCatt (me)

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:iconrone187:
Rone187 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch, we hope you continue to enjoy our cosplays!
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JollyArt25 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch^^
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EvilCharlotte Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank yah very muchh for the watch! QuQ <33333
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NatiArcanine Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Neko Emoji-28 (Yay sho happy) [V2] 
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KingDiesel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch!!
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NatiArcanine Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Neko Emoji-28 (Yay sho happy) [V2] 
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A-Dreamare Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2017   Digital Artist
¡Gracias por el +Watch!
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JWiesner Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2017  Professional
:iconbowingplz: Thank you so much for the +Watch! I'm glad you enjoy my art and comics.

Sorry for the late message, I'm currently on a hiatus! ^^;
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconemotethanks1plz::iconemotethanks2plz::iconemotethanks3plz::iconemotethanks4plz::iconemotethanks6plz:
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CassMutt Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016  Student General Artist
Thank you so very much for the watch <3
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