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The Perfect Stallion?

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Let the shipping begin...



This comic is a gift to, and the brainchild of :iconkobrakin: . It's a small token of my gratitude for his efforts in writing not one, but comedic two fan-fictions featuring a few of my OCs! (He also supplied the dialog for this comic. ;) )

Check out his work if you have the chance, he's known for comedy, (his hilarious comments on various deviations as an example,) but his more serious stories are well written and show off his literary skills.

Anyway, enough gushing.
Back to the Apple Family comic! :iconapplejackishappyplz:
(I swear I'm going to finish that thing one of these days...)
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiecondescendsplz:" title="TrixieCondescendsPLZ" /> ...Is Trixie to assume you are her date?
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> Bah! Don't remind me. Make no mistake, I'm only here because that idiotic site only provides refunds if you actually go on a date.
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiescoffplz:" title="TrixieScoffPLZ" /> Ha! The Great and Powerful Trixie is glad to know you did not make the mistake of presuming yourself worthy of her. She is also here for the sole purpose of securing a refund.
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> Good! Because there's no way I would even need that idiotic farce of a website to get a date. I only tried it on a whim to begin with, and certainly not because I was soul-crushingly lonely. That would be...absurd!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiescaredplz:" title="TrixieScaredPLZ" /> Yes...Trixie agrees! The idea that she would require assistance in finding companionship is...laughable! Yes. Completely laughable.
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> ...
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiescaredplz:" title="TrixieScaredPLZ" /> ...
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> ...Also, the fools running it are the most incompetent, mentally deficient degenerates I have ever encountered!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiedeviousplz:" title="TrixieDeviousPLZ" /> YES! Trixie agrees completely! To think they had the nerve of insulting her humble and generous nature is an unforgivable affront!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> Completely unforgivable! In fact, I'll see to it that the lot of them are thrown into a pit of enraged vipers!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiedeviousplz:" title="TrixieDeviousPLZ" /> Yes, and the pit should be surrounded with fire, so it's impossible for them to escape!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> Brilliant! We should also electrify the walls, so they have no chance of climbing out, either!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiedeviousplz:" title="TrixieDeviousPLZ" /> Naturally! Also, the floor should be freshly waxed, so they constantly slip and fall onto the snakes!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> GLORIOUS! Also, the snakes should be on fire!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixiedeviousplz:" title="TrixieDeviousPLZ" /> That does not even make sense, but Trixie agrees completely!
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> ...Have I mentioned how much I love that your ostentatious fashion sense and egocentric mannerisms remind me of myself?
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixieslyplz:" title="TrixieSlyPLZ" /> No, you did not, but has Trixie mentioned how much she loves that she is able to admire her reflection in your faceplate while speaking to you?
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> I was just about to say the same thing about those captivating eyes of yours. They remind me of a cobra poised for the kill.
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t…" alt=":icontrixieslyplz:" title="TrixieSlyPLZ" /> That is the loveliest compliment Trixie has ever received.
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/o/c…" alt=":iconcobraponyplz:" title="cobraponyplz" /> ...Would you like to see my Terrordrome? I just had my Weather Dominator upgraded.
<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/g/r/g…" alt=":icongreatpowerfultrixie:" title="greatpowerfultrixie" /> You had Trixie at "Dominator."
hero1211's avatar
the date probably ended when he took off his mask
Combatkaiser's avatar
is there a continuation to this?
KrytenMarkGen-0's avatar
I really enjoyed reading this. Priceless! :giggle: Nicely accurate to the Trixie character herself as well. :)
AlexKazhdan's avatar
Best. Critique. Ever.
Maddog3060's avatar
That needs to be a fic, now.
Jozilla877's avatar
Meanwhile two unicorns are watching this scene play out!
:iconsoundwaveplz:Dammit! I just lost ten bucks!
:icondjpon3:Why?
:iconsoundwaveplz:I made a bet with Neon lights that Trixie would end up with Blueblood while he bet that she would get with another being from an alternate dimension as a pony.
:icondjpon3:I know what you mean. I once made a bet with Octy to see who could please Luna more with their music and she won by playing some slow boring song called midnight soda.
:iconsoundwaveplz:It's called moonlight sonata.
:icondjpon3:Whatever. I don't really care if Luna likes all that frilly, boring, snooty music anyway.
:iconsoundwaveplz:It's better than what you play.
:icondjpon3:Remind me why we're dating again.
:iconsoundwaveplz:Because I was caught in a depression caused by the fact that I was being chased down by an assassin which forced me to leave my home country and come here and get I a job playing music that I hate to crowds of mindless ponies who didn't even know the slightest thing about music which lead to us meeting at a concert my friends driving us to the hotel I was staying at which happened to be one that you were staying at by coincidence causing us to meet more and more becoming friends. You eventually found out my hate for my job making you help me get a new job with the record company you work with making me appreciate you more and causing me to grow feelings for you after month of hiding I came out of the closet and told you how I felt after saving your life from the assassin that was hunting me. Need I say more?
:icondjpon3:.......You think they can hear us?
:iconsoundwaveplz:Don't care.
Goldbird13's avatar
Lol Midnight soda XD
And that song is hard to play! Gosh!
Magic piano it takes FOR FRIGGIN' EVER!!
Sorry am I spouting random things?
Jozilla877's avatar
Yes, yes you did! And on a comment that I don't think anyone cares about.
Goldbird13's avatar
Well then!
That's something I do everyday XD
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Goldbird13's avatar
I'm getting this strange feeling that you're being sarcastic...
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PonyTatsujin's avatar
dude, your a fucking genius. Plus, this critique just made my day! XD
Kobrakin's avatar
Haha, glad you enjoyed it. :D
PonyTatsujin's avatar
:iconspyplz: NU WURRIEZ MAET!!
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Kobrakin's avatar
This ship is 100% COBRA approved. :thumbsup:
:iconcobralogoplz:
Thundercracker417's avatar
Woohoo! Now Cobra doesn't have to add me to their "Kill List".
Kobrakin's avatar
:iconcobraplz: Actually, we only have a "Do Not Kill List" (and variations thereof) and a "Priority Kill List". Everyone else is considered to be on a "Kill Eventually" list!
:icondestro-plz: ...Have I mentioned lately how idiotic that system is?
:iconcobraplz: You're just grumpy that you aren't on the "Do Not Kill List". Speaking of which, add him to it.
:icondestro-plz: I hate you so very, very much...
Thundercracker417's avatar
Why thank you Commander! Now why don't you go and give Trixie a visit? I'm sure she could use one.
gamerpro2000's avatar
Bwhahaha. That it absolutely awesome.
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