That was cute! But, I hate to say it, the way you do your arms and how they bend is a little buggy. But over all not bad! BTW, where did the song come from?
Im only sketching out at the moment so im not careing to much about proportions XD when it comes to the real thing ill be fixing that all eg the facial strutcher, the hight of mari arms and legs XD the hair and turning circle in to hands xD but thanks for the feedback and the song is from the musical heathers