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© 2011 - 2019 Nanhart
Chapter One: My Time Page 1
Focused Character: Celestia
Genre: De/Reconstruction/Drama/Fantasy. There might be more as the plot writes itself. I'm a parodist at heart, so do keep care of that.
Rating: If you are mature enough to tell the difference between reality and fiction, fan work versus original than I think you are old enough to read this.
WARNING: Blood/death to fictional characters is going to be a certainty at some point. For more fun warnings, please read here: [link]

CONVENTIONAL WARNING: Prologue is being told from a stream of conscious perspective. Which is understandably messy and not the smartest move for a novice comic artist. Prologue is going to be like that (almost) the entire way. Story will be worth reading page 26. You're welcome.

Summary:
“Your mind cannot comprehend the true size of things. So you limit, place barriers. These barriers will weaken you...
But you will not live alone.”


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"There was a time WHEN magic was not plentiful..."
Thanks, ~Jon5670 and ~moreau13! First page and my English is already failing! ;¬;

Because I've seen a rise of this recently from in and out of this fandom (though it is hardly uncommon in others), when things involve age/gender groups people get weird so let me get this out of the way:

I don't make this for hard core-bronies/adults/etc. Please don't see this as a 'grownup' comic. Don't see this a seinen, josei, whatever. I hate it when people apply such restrictions on themselves and each other. It feels childish to restrict things from children and dour to not allow older people enjoy 'childish' things.

This is for MLP:FiM fans, what/whomever you are or are trying to be. :hug: I just hope I don't completely disappoint.

Page 00: [link]
Page 02: [link]

Characters © Hasbro
Inspiration © Lauren Faust and the entire MLP:FiM team
Story/Comic © Lilithnanhart
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KHough's avatar
Looks interesting.+fav 
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Zoomzoom90's avatar
Zoomzoom90|Hobbyist Writer
O_o
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JediSwordZAM|Hobbyist General Artist
Page one! Yes! it has begun! MWHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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belmor15's avatar
Good to see it starting up! I can't wait!
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J4B|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks really nice so far. I`ll definitely check out this more.
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Jon5670's avatar
Looks like this comic has fantastic potential, definitely going to be following this.
And a suggestion, would a "when" work well in between the words "time" and "magic"?
and Good luck with this!
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Nanhart's avatar
Nanhart|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ack! A needed correction already! XD

Thank you. For both the complement and help!
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moreau13's avatar
Your comic looks interesting...I'd also suggest changing that 'plenty' to 'plentiful' (along with Jon5670's additional 'when').
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Nanhart|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the correction!
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Slotos's avatar
Good child story is always awesome. We've all been there, we all remember how it feels and we are back to child mode whenever we try to learn something new. Keep up the good work and ignore whoever is immature enough to claim the one and only maturity.
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Specter-Von-Baren's avatar
The Others? Perhaps you're getting some inspiration from 'Of The Time Before'?

Anyway, I'm glad to see this is getting started. Come what may with Season 2, you'll at least have a dedicated reader in me.
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Nanhart's avatar
Nanhart|Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would if I knew what it was! XD Is it a book? Movie?

I'm so looking forward to Saturday myself! :excited:
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Specter-Von-Baren's avatar
Ah, well it's a fic on Equestria Daily. [link]

I'm just hanging loose with this Saturday. That way I won't build it up to be more than it is and can enjoy it for being it.
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Nanhart|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, I should read this to make sure I'm not accidentally copying someone else's idea~ TT¬TT

I wish I had that ability right now!
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Ivan-Chan|Student General Artist
Ooooh! I'm so excited for this comic~! >u<
Best of luck! :hug::heart:
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Nanhart's avatar
Nanhart|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :hug: :iconcryforeverplz:
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