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"Halo"

The shadows are moving
Howls break the still of night
But out there in the distance
Is there a glimmering of light?
A beacon of hope
Against the dark that consumes
Every pleasant memory
This monster of gloom and doom
One who can overcome the beast
A hero clad in white and gold
With vigilance and strength
And of course a pure white soul
With strength and aplomb
And a halo only I can see
She can drive away the night
She will come and rescue me
Another piece that I've been sitting on for a few years, with a little thought today I was able to put some interesting touches on it and turn it into something. The final product may or may not change from here, but I'm satisfied for now.
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Heather-Chrysalis Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
I really like it too. The imagery is very pretty, transforming the mind's eye into a nocturnal landscape haunting the pure white soul with flickers of hopeful light.
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mysticbliss11 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I like the way you describe my piece better than the piece itself. ;)
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Heather-Chrysalis Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Oh, thank-you for that! I'm glad you liked my comment as I liked your poem. :hug:
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