The Lone Rager

Love the idea, but the execution is disappointing.
Tons of unimportant features draw focus from the important parts of the background.

Important background elements: holes in the hulk uniform, eyes
Unimportant background elements (that are distracting): lights on the sky scrapers, bright shinny trash can, shinny light post, windows that almost appear to have something in them, bright edges of the building, linear brick accents and car light streaks

This could have been a killer piece, but too much is screaming for you to look at it. All of the unimportant aspects should have low contrast between themselves and the surrounding elements so that the cool angry eyes, and the skin poking through the cracks in the building get to dominate the background.
Note that most of those "unimportant" elements are neat, and give the piece lots of character, but they should be the things we see AFTER we've been drawn into the piece and have started to look very closely. Except maybe the trashcan. I'm not sure that that adds to it.

I'd never have written so many words about a piece that I didn't find inspiring. Your creativity makes me smile. I can see where you were going, and you clearly have the ability to execute effectively on the idea, with just a few tiny changes. Good luck on the contest.