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Shadila redesign/suggestion by MyDoggyCatMadi Shadila redesign/suggestion by MyDoggyCatMadi
I made the boobs a bit smaller because I thought they were to big. I gave her more of a messy original hair style. I also gave her a lighting on her jacket because i didn't think it was apparent that she had lighting powers before. I kept the pin through her ear because I liked it and gave her earrings. I also made the pants longer because i thought the shorter ones we're unnecessary and distracting.
Shadila is owned by: Shadila15 
Original:  Shadyla The Hedgehog 2017 by Shadila15

To all Shadila and all of her potential rabid fans:
I do not wish to belittle Shadila as an artist or person. 
I only wish to see her improve. 
Therefore this piece is protected by copyright law because it falls under criticism and fair use and I can not get in legal trouble. 
I do not wish to make anyone upset. 
I think Shadila is an ok artist at best and nothing more but that's just my opinion and I don't think everyone should take it to heart. 
I don't dislike Shadila as a person. I just think her oc could be better.
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She's really pretty! but the anatomy seems badly off. The head Doesn't look well drawn and the eye's are out of line. Her body just seems ideally stiff. Her breasts also look weird, Boobs are like water balloons, and gravity is what is pulling them down. Unless she has a push up bra then the chest at the top would have more curve. Her arms seem a bit long they should slightly go past the hip when it's at rest. The pink and black go well together <3 But in my opinion the lines seem a bit to thick. You could add more detail to the tear on her shirt. A bit more jagged. I see you where trying to do a 3/4th quarter view with her head, her spines, Spikes, Hair ( whatever ) Should go with her head not towards the camera. And her head just seems to sink into her shoulders. Her boots could use my alignment. But she is really pretty ^w^ You did a good job <3
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:iconaidenmoonshine:
AidenMoonshine Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Student Artist
Please draw my oc
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017   Digital Artist
No 
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:iconaddictartistandia:
AddictArtistAndia Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
I love the shorts and hair on this version a lot better. Seems to me that a running theme in the sonic community is that every oc always has the same hairstyle as another character.
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:iconjoeybacala:
Joeybacala Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
When can I spam her again
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017   Digital Artist
Never 
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:iconjoeybacala:
Joeybacala Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
:(
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:iconbox-of-roses:
Box-Of-Roses Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Student General Artist
The original design looks like a female Shadow recolor. Hopefully she'll accept this redesign.
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017   Digital Artist
She's just ignoring me 
typical 
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:icontsuuuuuun:
Tsuuuuuun Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist
For me, it's a better design... I just hope that 'she' could handle this...
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017   Digital Artist
She's just ignoring me and honestly I'm not even surprised 
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:icontsuuuuuun:
Tsuuuuuun Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist
That's true tho :v but hopefully she saw it
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:iconyersinia88:
Yersinia88 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good
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:icongunvoltfan101:
gunvoltfan101 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
Ayy that's pretty good!
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017   Digital Artist
Thanks
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:iconmscreepyplaguedoctor:
MsCreepyPlagueDoctor Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I'll be honest here but her character looks like a genderbent version of Shadow just with different colours and some extra quills
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017   Digital Artist
I said she looks like a fan child of shadow and rouge
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:iconmscreepyplaguedoctor:
MsCreepyPlagueDoctor Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Haha that works as well! XD 

I think maybe I might give her a bit of a redesign as well since I don't really have anything better to do right now. 
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:iconxxcreepyhoodxx:
XxcreepyhoodxX Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
This looks nice
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017   Digital Artist
Thanks 
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:iconxxcreepyhoodxx:
XxcreepyhoodxX Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
No problem!~
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:icontragicallycomedic:
TragicallyComedic Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
Hopefully she'll handle this well and won't lose it over the redesign.
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017   Digital Artist
I think she went to bed or is taking a break after someone spammed her with TF2
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:icontragicallycomedic:
TragicallyComedic Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
Tf2 huh? I think I know who that someone is.
Oh well, at least she'll have a cooler head when she comes back.
Unless she sees the spam first which is likely
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:iconjoeybacala:
Joeybacala Featured By Owner Edited Mar 19, 2017
HELLO. IT'S ME. I WAS WONDERING IF YOU WERE WONDERING THE SAME THING. I KNOW WHO IT IS. DID YOU EVER KNOW THAT THE TF2 SPAM WAS ALL FROM ME?
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:icontragicallycomedic:
TragicallyComedic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Depends, do turtles have shells?
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:iconjoeybacala:
Joeybacala Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
NO. THEIR SHELLS ARE ACTUALLY DEFORMED GIRAFFES.
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:icontragicallycomedic:
TragicallyComedic Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
gasp
So that's their secret
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017   Digital Artist
She saw it that's why she left for awhile I think 
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:icontragicallycomedic:
TragicallyComedic Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017
Ah, alrighty then
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