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Ashley Redesign/Suggestion by MyDoggyCatMadi Ashley Redesign/Suggestion by MyDoggyCatMadi
I thought the original shirt looked to much like misty's and the clogs looked out of the place to me... like imagine going on a long walk with those things which is basically what Pokemon is I also made the titties smaller because shes freaking ten. they don't have that big titters at that young age
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I also added just one glove idk i thought it looked cool and edgy.
THIS IS A REDESIGN IT'S TO HELP THE PERSON IMPROVE I AM NOT CLAIMING THE CHARACTER AS MY OWN ONLY THE ART IS MINE
Ashley belongs to: TheRealAshleyKetchum 
(Don't steal trace blah) 
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not bad, love the redesign and the outfit is really cute. i also like the silhouette in the background, it adds a nice touch.
it wouldn't help to brush up on your anatomy.. i had to look closely for a second before realizing that her leg wasn't bent to a rather concerning angle, and her fingers all look a bit off (some fingers are longer/shorter than others, and fingertips generally aren't pointy). it would also help to vary the size of the pen/brush that you're using. that way you can get a few smaller details.
aside from that, good job. i look forward to seeing more from you.
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TheMightyShockwave Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like this redesign over the actual design by Ashley. She looks really cute.

Although the fingers are a bit pointy, almost like claws. They should be more round, but this is still a great design nonetheless.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018   Digital Artist
Yeah the art is really old.
the reason why that is fire alpaca shit itself. And I didn’t want to draw it all again so I came up with this shitty chino style.
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TheMightyShockwave Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see, so it’s a style thing.

She still looks great, though. Ashley should be thanking you.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018   Digital Artist
I mean she blocked me
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:iconthemightyshockwave:
TheMightyShockwave Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That just means she's incapable of accepting any opinion other than her own.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018   Digital Artist
Yup 
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PokePrincess93 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute ^_^
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018   Digital Artist
Thank 
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PokePrincess93 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish I knew about this character while I was still doing my Mary Sue makeovers XDDD
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018   Digital Artist
Why did you stop doing them?
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:iconpokeprincess93:
PokePrincess93 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just been busy that I haven't been able to cross too many
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018   Digital Artist
Rip 
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:iconpokeprincess93:
PokePrincess93 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll probably get back to it soon :)
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:iconveronaluna:
VeronaLuna Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This redesign looks really nice. Lil Ashley looks really adorable in your style :D
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017   Digital Artist
Thank you 
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017   Digital Artist
Yours is so adorable! 
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justdrawingsnotcolor Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
actually though this redesign is actually cute and beautiful than the original , keep on going ! 0w0
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017   Digital Artist
I wills 
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:iconjustdrawingsnotcolor:
justdrawingsnotcolor Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
*thumbs up*
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AddictArtistAndia Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Really lovely. ^^ I took a look at her profile, so much cringe but I have a feeling it's a troll account. Then again, this is DA were all the crazies come to flock.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017   Digital Artist
Her shipping is incest too 
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AddictArtistAndia Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Saw that too. Troll or not, that's disgusting. Lol
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glibmonster Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
O_O. I really dislike that profile, but this is adorable.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017   Digital Artist
Thanks bruh 
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:icontherealashleyketchum:
you made her look weird! i dont like it!
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rosiepie15 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She's 10!

She's supposed to look like this!
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tsubakuraqua Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
                                Weird like your sex life
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Suuuuuup Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017
She's 10! At least just say "thank you, I appreciate it but I just going to stick with my design." Your OC is much more 'weird' and she's at least acknowledge your OC's age. Trust me, most of the people will love this one than the original one because they have brains
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Puccalover345 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017   Artist
Weird?! She looks like a normal 10 year old girl to me.
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Sparrowflight14 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You could at least say thank you....
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017   Digital Artist
K wasn't meant to satisfy you
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Earth-Dreamers Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this redesign! It looks great!
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017   Digital Artist
thanks
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turtlezarefat Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist
This is so cool! I like your design for this character a lot!
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017   Digital Artist
Thank you so much X3
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turtlezarefat Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist
You're welcome!
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Box-Of-Roses Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student General Artist
Why are your redesigns always so much better than the original?
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Moshininja13 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That’s the point of a redesign though
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017   Digital Artist
I mean.... it's not that THAT much better. The only thing wrong with the original design was the big oooolllll titters and the clogs 
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Box-Of-Roses Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student General Artist
The original was bad. The art was okay, but there were a lot of errors.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017   Digital Artist
Really? Like what? 
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Box-Of-Roses Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student General Artist
Spelling, capitalization, spacing, lack of explanation/detail. I'm talking about the art description though.
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017   Digital Artist
oh i was talking about the design 
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AuroraTheApprentice Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student General Artist
im a sucker for gloves :3 

also i like the hoodie! this is Awesome looking!
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MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017   Digital Artist
thanks this was a bit of a challenge because there wasn't any BIG problems with her design beside the big ol' titters. But other than that....
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AuroraTheApprentice Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student General Artist
it's odd though to have a profile dedicated to a ship :/
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:iconmydoggycatmadi:
MyDoggyCatMadi Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017   Digital Artist
Originally supposed to be dedicated to Souldi Soul x Madi
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AuroraTheApprentice Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Student General Artist
huh Meow :3 
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