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To Silence I Call
I do implore you, gods of old Shine some light on my way It is dark here and very cold For your wisdom I pray To go or stay To leave dismay? To stay or go To halt or flow? "A little girl In such a whirl? Shall we now look What her so shook?" I paint my world in sad, strong lines Exactly how I feel I do wish I could read the signs You surely have shown me This way or that Will I fall flat? That way or this I'll step amiss? "A small, lost soul On a dark stroll What can we say To ease her pain?" I have only come before you With nowhere else to turn Tell me all the things that are true How long before I burn? "What of this one What has life spun? Do we tell her What's to occur?" I do implore you, gods long lost Grant me this one last will I see your eyes covered by frost Guess they were always still
This is my re-imagining of the character clockwork, who is now a girl who has auditory schizophrenia and psychopathy. She firmly believes that before you die, you can gain more time to live by killing people for the great ones and carving the number 7 onto their corpse.
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Hey, I had a look at your page and understand why you may be mad. Sometimes schizophrenia does make people insane and that was the basis for the re-imagining. If you're mad of just the idea of a mental illness being featured, then I implore you to come up with a good reason for a murderer. If their backstory is tragic, then they might have PTSD. It's difficult. If you have a specific problem with how I portray schizophrenia, please tell me what. If it is just because it's featured in a bad light, then please focus on the story as a whole. SJWs are everywhere these days and I'd appreciate if there was an actual flaw explained instead of someone getting triggered. Looking forward to your feedback. I've been waiting for a while.
It's the fact that most of the time, people with schizophrenia aren't violent. Psychopaths on the other hand make up a lot of violent crimes. She could schizophrenia mixed with something else, but most schizophrenics are not violent, and if they are, it's normally not directly related to schizophrenia.
Why? I'm guessing you mean the portrayal of the mental disorder. I'm not really sure what to say about that because I tried my best to portray auditory schizophrenia - in a way that also suits the story. If it's insensitive because it "mocks" the original artwork or something, I'm sorry but the original one didn't really display the full effects of the terrible things that happened to Natalie. It was essentially a card to say be sorry for this character. Anyway, please explain what you mean so I can improve for the future and edit the story.