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Naruto OC: Kagai Luin by muzikmastamaku Naruto OC: Kagai Luin by muzikmastamaku
COMMISSIONED by ~Luin-Anor ^__^ and he's not my character ^__^

At last! The second commissioned naruto OC! the long awaited commissions of my first commissioners ^__^

Kagai Luin © Rob Lennox / ~Luin-Anor
Konoha Symbol © Masashi Kishimoto
Character Description / Design / Profile / Luin's Ninjutsu / Hakagetana / Mind Fortress(Kokoro Toride) / Art © Rob Lennox / ~Luin-Anor
Art © Marc Landingin / ~muzikmastamaku

Rough Sketch finished on paper
Digitally Inked, Coloring and Shading finished with Mouse on Adobe Photoshop CS 2

Sir Rob!! Finally itís done!:D I hope you like Luinís Designs and Colors.

Comments are highly appreciated! Thank you so much! Commission details are on the commission link above :D Thatís It! His full character profile is below^__^ anyway, hope you guys like him :D enjoy! :wave:


Character profile info:
Name: Kaigai Luin ( 加賀井 ルいん )
Nicknames: Konohaís Grey Ghost
Age: 20
Height: 170cm
Weight: 140lbs
Build: Slender
Gender: Male
Blood type: O
Eye colour: Grey/Mirror (See Kekkai Genkai)
Hair colour: Dark Sandy Taupe
Rank: Jounin
Village of Birth: Village in Mountain Country
Village of Residence: Konohagure
Element: None
Accessories: Headscarf
Profession/Job: Jounin, Spy/assassination specialist
Unique traits: Shadow transformation Jutsus
Likes: Snow, cold clear nights,
Dislikes: Stupid people, being outsmarted

Ninjutsu: 60%
Hand to Hand/Taijutsu: 40%

Personality: Adventurous, often very composed, quick thinking and a cunning speaker. He is however, quick to anger and will not hesitate to throw the first punch in a fight.

Appearance: Average height, slender build, pale skin, sandy brown medium length messy hair. Grey eyes, sometimes appearing to shine like mirrors.


As a child, Luin lived in a small farming village in the foothills of a great mountain range to the West. Luin's mother was an outsider and ex-Shinobi from the Hidden Village of the Dusk who died when he was young. It was from this woman Luin inherited his bloodline limit and much of his natural talent.
Inspired by his difference he was a restless child. After his father died of a natural heart attack Luin left the village to travel the world and find explanation of his latent ability to blend into the shadows.
He desires to see everything he possibly can during his lifetime and lives only for adventure. He spent most of his life before he became he came to Konoha busking in the towns and villages he passed through. He plays the flute and can juggle/perform rhythmic acrobatic circus skills for small crowds in order to earn a few coins with which to continue his travels.
Of course, the dangers of a being a young boy travelling alone has meant he has learnt to defend himself over the years. Both by learning to use a sword and by using his natural ability to blend into the shadows he has managed to survive many dangers.
He arrived alone in Konoha at the age of 12 by chance, accidentally interrupting an academy training mission, in the confusion he was attacked, and from his self defence and use of strange self taught shadow Jutsus impressed the academy teachers, who recommended he should join the academy.
He graduated the academy the very same year and joined a Genin team comprised of Teisei Shin and Tetsu Aito under the command of Takai Ukito.
He was the first member of his group to pass the Chuunin exams at the age of 14 and the first to become a Jounin, which he achieved shortly before his 18th Birthday. Since becoming a Jounin Luin has taken part in many solo missions of high importance given his pre-disposition to spying and reconnaissance. He is also an accomplished assassin. It is likely that he will be enrolled into ANBU in the near future.


Weapon of Choice:
Hakagetana - 30 inch straight blade sword with engraved leaf motif.
Battle Strengths/Weaknesses:
He is quick, acrobatic, agile, quick stamina recovery, excellent spy. However he does not possess a great offensive ability, instead being much better at avoiding being found/hit, relatively low chakra pool.


(Own Ninjutsus)
Luin has no elemental affinity but has exceptionally well balanced yin and yang chakra. He therefore uses Light and Shadow Jutsus in conjunction with his sword styles:

Kage Buyou no Jutsu (Shadow Dance Technique)
Type: ?-rank, Defensive, Offensive, Supplementary
the ability to literally become a shadow. In this mode a shadowy image is visible in the open, but blends perfectly into the shade. In this form the user is invulnerable to physical attacks but also cannot perform attack themselves either.

Kage ItaiFurikku (Shadow Body Flick)
Type: ?-rank, Offensive, Range(1-20m)
Uses shadowy chakra to propel the user a distance almost instantaneously. The jutsu appears as if a teleportation move, an enemy simply sees a small puff of black shadow and Luin will appear in a different place.

Menosameruyou Boufuu No Jutsu (Stunning Storm Technique)
Type: ?-rank, Offensive, Range(1-20m)
uses Light chakra to create a spray of white sparks which dazzle and stun the enemy.

Kage Bakushin (Shadow Dash)
Type: ?-rank, Defensive, Supplementary
Using his shadow dance Jutsu, Luin assumes the form of a shadowy Fox with the purpose of travelling extremely quickly without spending large amounts of energy.

Kage Nohizumi (Shadow Warp)
Type: ?-rank, Offensive, Defensive, Range(20-500m)
Luin's newest Jutsu is a work in progress. Intensely channelling shadow chakra into an object, Luin effectively dissolves the object into shadow. The object can then be instantaneously transported to another location. At present, Luin is practicing with moving small objects over short distances. (Working the move into a juggling routine for practice!) Perhaps with work Luin will be able to move larger objects, over much larger distances, maybe even people...

( (Naruto-based Ninjutsus)


Genjutsu :


(Coming Soon)




Kekkai Genkai / Advanced Bloodlimit:
The Mind Fortress ( Kokoro Toride 心砦 ) - A Bloodline of origin from The Hidden Village of the Dusk, a small mountain Shinobi village far to the West.
Members of the clan who possess the bloodline all possess the same grey eye colour. When the condition is being used the grey Iris expands enveloping the pupil and the grey colour changes to a highly reflective, mirror like shine.
The bloodline is a passive dojutsu. The user cannot control it, but more it is an automatic defence. The eyes act to make the user immune from almost all types of Genjutsu, as soon as any Genjutsu is cast against the Mind Fortress user their eyes change to mirror shine.

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Tombstoneshordyy Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2017
Your OC looks badass 
blgmani Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Student General Artist
This oc is like sauske. Edgy and a Mary sue
shijimahouki Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2016

great picture ! you can draw your character in a realistic way ?
darkevee1020 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
 hey can i use your village name my character comes from a village with the same concept please.
Sakura-Uzumaki12 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student
where do you "make" or "create" them at?
NINJAWERETIGER Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
muzikmastamaku Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
sonicwe23 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
beenhated Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
MabelTrip Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
How do you come up with such an awesome OC???
SoftKittenPaw Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013   General Artist
From Description:
COMMISSIONED by ~Luin-Anor ^__^ and he's not my character ^__^

At last! The second commissioned naruto OC! the long awaited commissions of my first commissioners ^__^
ryomon321 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Writer
Oh. My. GOD! I just love your OC for so many reasons. 1st off, it's so well written and you give off his story so well without going too much into details (something I'm still trying to learn). Also, your drawing is incredible. The shadow and light effects, the detailling of your character's portrayal is phenomenal. And finally, your character is genuinely likeable and a strong-looking and sounding ninja. I would definitely see that in the anime. Just as a question, do you make requests? Because I have an OC in mind, but I suck at drawing, so I was wondering if maybe you'd like to draw my character for me? Please?
NatKH97 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student Filmographer
I love this oc prety much because you though so well of every single detail but there is one thing that i would like to say :0 It's just a suggestion ^__^" I think the eye tattoo thing on his back should go instead of on his shoulder, it should go in the middle of his back :) this is only my opinion, you can do whatever you want :P Once again very well done :)
CaraValoraTabishi Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
do you take requests on OC's? I really want one!
Zorvix Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh... my.... god.... I literally thought of a ridiculously similar guy a few years ago... This is amazing!
Shiranai-Atsune Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
does ur OC have any teammates?
sarani-chan Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i really like his design :la: his face has lots of character to it
RainbowCandeh Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my my my very awesome job.

I wish Maeko could meet this guy he'd be very interesting for her to fight
ViCat Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist
Very creative :D
Soma245 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a leaf ninja
neito56 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
Seems like his clan would be a big problem for the Uchiha and any other genjutsu clans XD
beautydevil55 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LameDraw Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Amaizing details of his techniques(jutsus)*,well done character,same about the story, in 3 words this is A Piece of Art!One more thing, I really want to know the answer to :iconwolfmcfang:'s question so plz answer him. :D
*I dunno if techniques should be written like this so I wrote jutsus instead
muzikmastamaku Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Professional General Artist
ah yes, sorry about the reply man! my pc's goin through alot rendering 3dstuff for my demo reel hehe

anyway, i basically draw them by hand(traditionally), scan then trace(ink) it through photoshop and do necessary adjustments with the use of a ruler tool just make a straight line to adjust the proportion of the face. It's really quite handy once you get used to it.

that's really my workflow because I don't use tablet :(
NaughtyOokami2011 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
:O super cool!!!
PinaColada101 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
Wow youre so creative!
RabinMiguel Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2010
i like him most with the hood!
so, does he have a team/squad thing or sumthin?
Wolfmcfang Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010
how do you make him look the same each time you draw him
NinjaK2D7 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
My guess would be just practice drawing the same person, make them unique. Give them distinct features like curved eyebrows. The eyes are the most important part honestly, so just practice drawing them over and over. Eventually it will become like doodling to you.
katheebah Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
excellent sens of color and anatomy here
feathseb000 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
very nice i love looking at people's oc
charmingshiho Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010
mmm verry intresting .. do you roll play ? cuse one of my naruto oc's are intrested to see just what he can do .... and don't be foold by my worable spelling , icon , or my characters . XD
Musou-Enrai Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2010  Hobbyist
This is good! :D I like your coloring style! :lol:
7usaM Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
peek-a-boo09 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2010
This is very very VERY qood!(:<3
ERIC-ARTS-inc Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
This has to go down as among the coolest Naruto OCs on DA, so well fleshed out as a character with powers and Jutsu that sound like theyed be amazing to see in the anime. And his clan's Kekkei Genkai...Now that sounds awsome. Does the Kokoro Toride have the ability to reflect Genjutsu back onto it's caster as well? or is it strictly defense because it's involuntary on the user's part? Sorry friend the Orochimaru in me is surfacing I love well put together OCs like this.
CeleGaa Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
Awesome! Wait so u do Comisions 4 OCs? Could u do mine possibly? i would do it myself but i can't upload anything 4 some reason.
Wolvergirl Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome work
Shikaru-Nara Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010

i have a lot of oc ideas and cant draw worth crap

plzzzz help!

i have vivid descritions
DuskNinjaKenji Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010  Student Filmographer
Wow this OC is cool! Say, would you mind looking at this link? I think you may find it interesting. ^_^ :[link]
Nexomi Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009
This one is cool too...I love the expressions agin..:P Nice job^^
FadingExodus Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009
Very nice :).
Oc: *blushes a bit*
...Oh god *Covers oc's eyes* Sorry My oc likes yours...Alot to say in the least -Is embarassed-
RubyP Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love how you set up the Character sheets... O.O I want one...
Rain-petal Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
awesome, I'd like to do one of these. I really like how the character looks when he's in his assassin outfit and traveler cloak.
JohnCatalano Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Professional General Artist
XD So awesome. Fav!
HenshinDaisuke Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2008
Thats very cool lookin
Zaraki-Killer-Shadow Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008  Student General Artist
all your OC's are nice :D
*favs them*
Kagai's black traveling jacket looks like Kiba's jacket in the first series :D (not Shippuden)
Photoshop-Kidd Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008   Digital Artist
Zeraphalanx Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
This is an excellent artwok you got there. I like how it is all layed out so everything can be seen on the character. I like the anime Naruto as well. This is pretty fantasic, Muzik.8-)
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