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This is my first *real* critique, so it is probably gonna be lame, but gimme a chance to get used to giving them. :XD: I shall follow my usual format.

What I like:
The eyes
Normally, I am crazy about your eyes, but this one isn't one of the best...still, they are insanely amazing! D: They are so beautiful. The pale lines around them absolutely fascinate me. They are sooo lovely. <3
The lips
I would say the whole face, but each of the features is just so perfect to me in a different way. I love the way that you did the lighting on the lips. It makes them look textured, like lips really are. It is just beautiful and adds a certain amount of realism that makes it so much prettier.
The coloring
Green just so happens to be my favorite color, but I think you picked the perfect shades and hues for this image. It gives it a really earthy feel that I absolutely love.
The plant
It really compliments the earthy feel to the rest of this picture. The vagueness of it and the coloring is really great. It gives it a more spiritual feel.

What I dislike:
The neck
I dunno. It just looks a little off. It is probably right, but it looks a little too broad to me...IDK. The more I look at it, the better it looks, but it still just seems off.
The white spots/lighting.
This is a personal thing. The dotty bits of light are the one thing with anime style that I just can't adore. I mean, you rock it, but I still just dislike it. :XD:

What I love:
The hair
WOWOWOWOW! Normally, I am sort of 'meh' about how hair looks when drawn but this looks so insanely amazing. The way it flows is amazing. The high lights and low lights are placed perfectly. All of the individual strands you added give it amazing depth. <33
The body
My first thought is 'the boobs' but that isn't true. I love the way you did the shoulders and the arms and the rest. It has a very soft, round feeling to it. She LOOKS feminine. It is just so beautiful and amazing.

All in all, this is absolutely brilliant. I am sooo stealing it for my background. >.> :P
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TheSandHut Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
XD Thanks for the critique!!
The only thing i really want to point out is those harsh bits of white arent actually the lighting, but umm plant juice, for a lack of a better word.
Thanks for your honesty I appreciate you taking the time to write this out for me ^_^
But its not in background format! :P
Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
Someday I will stop giggling at the term plant juice.
Okay, well, if it is sap or something, then I can remove lighting from my list of dislikes! :XD: :boogie: One less thing. :P
Background format? O.o
TheSandHut Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
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