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You Asked for It
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Published: December 15, 2011
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Nine out of ten people said they wanted to read some of my old work. Clicking through file after file of utter SHIT, I found the very worst of it. I am so sickened and ashamed of this that I want to scrub myself clean.

The story was actually pretty interesting. It was a fantasy world mixed with Native American culture. The characters were being sent on a quest to the West, though none of them were sure why. Along the way, there was fights, trials, visions, and romance. The different clans they hailed from spent a few weeks in late summer together, so they knew each other, but the clans are usually not very friendly. Their journey helped them break down these walls between them.

Eeh, there is more, but I am currently in need of some coffee and a shower. So I'll leave it at: the plot wasn't so godawful. Just my writing.

Someone kill me, please. This so awful. Yuck.
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:icondragonidleplz: This is your old stuff...?
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xD Comparatively ancient now.
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Okay then. :3

Comparing old to new, which do you like more? :)
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I prefer how my writing style has developed. I mean, I feel like things flow easier, make more sense and are more detailed.
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:nod: I'd say the same for my own writings.
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That's what counts~
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^^
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It isn't that bad. I've read worse, especially from those at the age you were when you wrote this. Your criticism amused me though :P
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It sucks and you are cruel for patronizing me. x3
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D: I'm not patronizing you
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:I I can read that BLAH up there too. :P
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:| It isn't that bad. Despite the some of the really, wince-worth stuff up there, it still succeeds in capturing the reader's attention.
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