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Nine out of ten people said they wanted to read some of my old work. Clicking through file after file of utter SHIT, I found the very worst of it. I am so sickened and ashamed of this that I want to scrub myself clean.

The story was actually pretty interesting. It was a fantasy world mixed with Native American culture. The characters were being sent on a quest to the West, though none of them were sure why. Along the way, there was fights, trials, visions, and romance. The different clans they hailed from spent a few weeks in late summer together, so they knew each other, but the clans are usually not very friendly. Their journey helped them break down these walls between them.

Eeh, there is more, but I am currently in need of some coffee and a shower. So I'll leave it at: the plot wasn't so godawful. Just my writing.

Someone kill me, please. This so awful. Yuck.
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondragonidleplz: This is your old stuff...?
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
xD Comparatively ancient now.
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:iconrelic-angel:
Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay then. :3

Comparing old to new, which do you like more? :)
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
I prefer how my writing style has developed. I mean, I feel like things flow easier, make more sense and are more detailed.
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: I'd say the same for my own writings.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
That's what counts~
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It isn't that bad. I've read worse, especially from those at the age you were when you wrote this. Your criticism amused me though :P
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
It sucks and you are cruel for patronizing me. x3
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
D: I'm not patronizing you
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
:I I can read that BLAH up there too. :P
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:| It isn't that bad. Despite the some of the really, wince-worth stuff up there, it still succeeds in capturing the reader's attention.
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