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Selfish, possessive,
Brushed off as overprotective

Fuck that shit
You're mine, got it?
If I want it,
You'll end it
You're mine, damn it

It's ironic
I'm the one that strays
But I'm afraid
Things won't stay the same

Manic, demanding
Childish when I am commanding

Listen you bitch
You're mine, got it?
If I ask for it
You'll give it
You're mine, accept it

It's amusing
You're the one being hurt
But I'm the one
Questioning what is worth

Obsessive, jealous
No one understands us

That's fine
You're still mine
You're still my friend
That will never end
You're mine, always

Selfish, possessive
Brushed off as overprotective
Someday, I'll kill her
Give into the blur
And destroy everything
That defines her

Someday, I'll lash out
Give into the doubt
And eliminate her and
What she's about

Someday, I'll finally snap
No longer give a crap
And end the endless cycle
With a resound, perfect slap


I don't even know what I'm going on about anymore. I'm starting to suspect that some of that anger is still inside me.
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xX-SS-Xx Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love this, its EXACTLY like one of my ex bfs.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
xD I'm not sure if that is a good or bad thing, but I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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Nachtetraum Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Perhaps there is under lying anger at the center of it all but the words you have allow the poem to flow well and it all ties together nicely.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
Yeah. If it lets me write, I can't hate these feelings, but it would be nice to smile sincerely and not question myself. xD
Thank you again :hug: Your words are always encouraging. :)
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ellyemma Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
you suspect ? It would be a miracle if it didn't by the way you write about it ...

but I like the poem ... does that make me a bad person ?
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
I've never really thought that it was my own anger though...It is difficult to explain. xD

xD It most certainly does not. I put this out there to be enjoyed, and since you can, I thank you. ^^ :P
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BethKirky Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student Filmographer
i like the poem to :)
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DominiqueG Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah... just suspecting it... =\
Nicely done, though.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
Shh, I'm still trying to believe that I'm happy.
xD
Thanks
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DominiqueG Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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