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Green eyes
Imagine my surprise
Waking up in bed
To see the forest

Pink lips
Nobody could resist
Least of all me
And you, so I see

Crimson hair
Yes, even there
She was like fire
Or maybe just desire

She had the looks
From her hips to her face
She had the motion
That undeniable grace
She had the smarts
It was her race

So why did she lose?
Why is she so loose?
Doesn't she realize
To be with her, many men would die?

No, I guess not
She fell with a cry of
"Get it while its hot."
And they bought

Vacant eyes
She can't see the sky
Only the earth above her
And the wood that cradles her

Broken lips
It is painful to see them split
But she says they don't hurt
For what that's worth

Ragged hair
Styled like she doesn't care
For some reason, I think she does
Or maybe it is only one of us
"In Love with an Addict" continued
This time, the speaker is sick of sharing their addition, so they steal their precious gem from everyone else forever. With the help of a friend, they kill and bury the girl.
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, poor addict.
Scary possessive person is scarily possessive O.O
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
Shut up. She isn't human. She was mine to do with as I pleased. -_-
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: I love you
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
Love you too :3
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xxmusiclovermxx Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Student Writer
Holy crap this is really good!! :3
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
:) Thank you so much and thanks for the :+fav: on this as well.
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xxmusiclovermxx Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Student Writer
your welcome :)
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Didaskaleinophobia Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
I'm so jealous of your skillz. In other words, this poem is crazy good, along with In Love With an Addict. You should be very proud.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
xD Wut skillz?
Thank you ^^ I'm glad that you like 'em. Honestly, I am pretty proud of this mini series. ^^
:hug: Thanks again and thanks as well for the :+fav::)
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Didaskaleinophobia Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
Ain't no thang.
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