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Silicon lips
Too thin hips
She's beautiful
Breakable
But beautiful

Broken smile
Smells vile
She's perfect
A reject
But perfect

Infected veins
Breathes with pain
She's amazing
Disgusting
But amazing

Empty eyes
Mouthful of lies
She's mine
Sublime
But mine
She's my addict
My very own bad habbit
She's my poison
Nothing but a toy and
A good time
Is that such a crime?

This is written from the point view of someone that is sleeping with a meth addict. They aren't really in love with the girl, but they're possessive over her and sort of protective, but they enjoy hurting her at the same time.

Next on my list to write: erotic poetry :rofl:
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*demands you ignore the lateness of this comment*

Love the image I get while reading this. What inspired you to write this?
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
O: Late comment is late

Do you remember a few years ago, while we were still in school, and I went around singing that I was in love with a stripper? No? Well, it comes from the same source.
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:|

I remember :P I was wondering why it reminded me of that :XD:
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
:)

xDD Yeah. She has been visiting me again
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Hinfallend Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome :P
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simplyfeel Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good poem. For a second, I thought you were talking abut dating Lindsay Lohan. BAD JOKE ALERT.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
My angel is too beautiful for that. xDD
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MonsterSalsa Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011   Photographer
hah! I like it a lot XD
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
:) Thank you
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CherylWho Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
Majorly interesting...good work!

:)
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
^^ Thank you
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Nachtetraum Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well written an enjoyable to read.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Thanks dear and thanks as well for the :+fav::)
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Nachtetraum Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Always welcome hun ^ ^
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lolalovely2109 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
love it...it's amazing how one can love someone and see all there flaws and yet still love them...i know exactly how that feels.
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
I think that if you can't see someone's flaws, you don't see the real them and you can't truly love them then.
Thanks for the :+fav::)
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lolalovely2109 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
it's true..like with my girl friend...she was born a little different with her toes and her anger and stuff and she hates it when i tell her its adorable or cute...lol
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Well, it is easier to love the flaws of others than to love your own. xD
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lolalovely2109 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i agree<3
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mjthinkpink Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my gosh i adore this. i love how you point out her flaws. it's like you're admitting it's bad but you don't care. orsomething. but yeah! this us really good, human, love your word choice c:
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Beauty without flaws is inhuman, and to see her for what she is and still accept her surpasses all other adoration. (:
Thank you so much for your praise. ^^
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ForeverMenou Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*shivers* Dark....I LIKE IT!
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
:) Thanks. I really like this one. ^^

Thanks as well for the :+fav::)
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ForeverMenou Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:3 no prob
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Bloodedtears16 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student Photographer
In love with an addict?
Im an addict in love with this poem :D
I shall be watching you (;
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
Thank you so much. :3 I shall be continuing this story with other poems, so I hope that you enjoy.

Thanks as well for the :+fav: and :+devwatch:. :heart:
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ttylerjamess Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I love the imagery created this with poem. Good writing, keep it up :)
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011
:) Thanks. This is the first in a series. I shall try to do so~

Thanks as well for the :+fav::)
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ttylerjamess Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I'm looking forward to it :)

You're welcome :hug:
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
^^ Thanks and thanks again for the :+devwatch: :hug:
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ttylerjamess Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome again (:
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Muzica-chan Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011
Again: thank you for the :+fav: :)

I try not to spam people's walls when I can avoid it. xD ^^U
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ttylerjamess Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It's alright, wall spam of thanks is fine :P
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