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:icondeylac:
Here, everything's perfect.

Vision first : A wonderful use of the environment. Focus and exposure on the wall, to get the man in the frame, ou of focus, a simple outline. Excellent.
And so really original.

The composition. The focused part take one third of the left of the picture. Really well balanced. The wall itself take an half of the frame, and composes a picture based on opposition :
The wall, plain and sharp, against the empty space of a private alley.
The soft tones of the stone, against the hard outline of the man where white and black fight.
The reality of a wall, and the appearance of a shadow fading on the distance.
Everything in a square, which is the perfect format for the composition.
I wish I could have a better english to describe it. :)
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This is a first attempt at a critique so i hope it makes sense. First of all i love the black and white, it really works well for the picture and gives even more detail to the brick wall. The silhoutte of the person in the background looks great and it makes you wonder who he is and where he is going to or coming from. I feel the black and white also gives it a classier feel as well, if that makes sense. All in all i really like this piece of work and look forward to seeing more pieces of work from this Deviant.
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:iconanastipanic:
anastipanic Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great composition and the texture of the wall!
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011   Photographer
thank you ;)
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:iconfinduk:
Finduk Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Student Filmographer
basarili. Cok begendim bunu... (;
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:iconzihnisinir:
zihnisinir Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
bunu da görmemişim ben yaf. benimkine ne kaddar da benziyor :D çok iyi mustafa tebrikler
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010   Photographer
:D :D
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:icontwiggyteeluck:
TwiggyTeeluck Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:wave:
You've been featured here: [link]
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010   Photographer
;)
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:iconvane4ka:
Vane4ka Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010
that's very professional. well done
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 6, 2010   Photographer
many thanks.. :)
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:iconcoasterstreak:
CoasterStreak Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010  Student Photographer
I love this perspective. There is something about it that greatly intrigues me :D
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010   Photographer
thank you Casey.. :)
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:iconcoasterstreak:
CoasterStreak Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Student Photographer
You're welcome! It's my pleasure :wave:
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:iconmarcweiz:
MarcWeiz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010
Just beautiful! Once again, I'm envious.
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010   Photographer
:)

many thanks.. ;)
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:iconaugenweide:
augenweide Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
your work is featured in my new journal...[link]
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010   Photographer
;)
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:iconvesnasvesna:
VesnaSvesna Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009  Professional Photographer
featured here [link]
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:iconbeatriz13:
Beatriz13 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
someone is stealing ur deviation [link]
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009   Photographer
thanks my friend.. reported it..;)
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:iconbeatriz13:
Beatriz13 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
=}
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:iconar-ka:
aR-Ka Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2009
Mustafa check this out man:

[link]
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009   Photographer
thanks my friend.. reported it..;)
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:iconhumanization:
Humanization Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2009
absolutely beautiful! definite fave and i actually put it as my dp :D nice work!
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2009   Photographer
thnks :)
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:iconsinan34:
Sinan34 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
abi bu inanlmaz güzel ya
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:icongamasu:
gamasu Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
:heart:
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009   Photographer
:damphyr:
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:iconkaarmen:
Kaarmen Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009
wonderful shot
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009   Photographer
thank you Karmen.. :shamrock:
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aqualion Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009  Student
WOW! --FUCKING BEEEE-U-TY-FULL!!

btw, what does the 'wing' icon mean?
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:iconxmagdax:
xmagdax Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
featured here: [link] :)
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009   Photographer
:damphyr:
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:iconyusufyasar:
yusufyasar Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
güzel yorum...
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009   Photographer
teşekkürler Yusuf,

selamlar..
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:iconselimselimoglu:
selimselimoglu Featured By Owner May 31, 2009   Photographer
gerçekten güzel kare...
tebrikler...
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009   Photographer
teşekkürler Selim..
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:iconluciaconstantin:
LuciaConstantin Featured By Owner May 24, 2009   General Artist
Hello! Your work received a feature in here: 24th
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 24, 2009   Photographer
:damphyr:
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:iconluciaconstantin:
LuciaConstantin Featured By Owner May 24, 2009   General Artist
You are welcome! :hug:
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:iconzevl:
zevl Featured By Owner May 20, 2009
Nice work and very interesting idea :nod:
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 20, 2009   Photographer
thanks zevL.. :)
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 20, 2009   Photographer
:damphyr:
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:iconduckmiesta:
duckmiesta Featured By Owner May 19, 2009   Photographer
Powerful B/W shot.. leads you throughout, and a very strange siloutte never seen one like that before.. its cool
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 20, 2009   Photographer
thanks a lot Christopher ;)
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:iconjox1989:
JoX1989 Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
featured here -> [link]

:heart:
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 18, 2009   Photographer
:damphyr:
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:icondavidcraigellis:
DavidCraigEllis Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
Your excellent image has been featured [link] :w00t: :XD:
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:iconmustafadedeoglu:
MustafaDedeogLu Featured By Owner May 18, 2009   Photographer
:damphyr:
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:icontmrky:
Tmrky Featured By Owner May 11, 2009
Tadı tuzu yerinde derler ya işte öyle :)
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NIKON CORPORATION
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Date Taken
May 2, 2009, 2:39:43 PM

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