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I toyed with titles for this piece for a really long time. 
Scared, terrified, shaking down to the core.
I'm so happy but sometimes can't sleep.
Encouraged, excited, ecstatic, elated...
Why I'm awake to stretch my legs,
Why my cur might pee in a U-Haul,
Why my anklet is unraveling,
Why I never want to cut my hair again,
Why I am who I am today,
Why I am a patriot,
Why I want to visit every town in this state,
Why I want to cry with my best friend,
Why I'm in love with the future,
Why I'm no longer glued to my past!
Why I'm out of bed in the morning,
Why I smile at every dirt road
If I keep walking
Down this naked walkway,
Naked myself, unknowing,
It will lead me to a door,
And doors lead to answers.
Girls in horror films always open the door,
Even if we tell them not to.
They're not stupid; they're real!
But I still wouldn't open the door..........
But you can.
Come!  And lead me to through gate after pergola after office after doorstep.
Open my chest, my lips, my tong
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In Pulse
This blood flowed up from the inferior vena cava-
From nowhere near the head.
This love I have for you stirred deeper,
And I suppose without thought.
Into the right atrium, the idea stirred.  
It flowed quickly through the tricuspid valve,
Without stopping,
Until the valve closes with a "lub"-
The origin shut off.
The right ventricle thrust up,
And we're breathing.
Back into the heart,
But this time we're left.
The left atrium allows the flow one more time.
We trickle through the mitral valve,
And the blood is for a moment sitting.
But then it's gone,
And the aortic valve slams with a "dup"...
With no more pulses to come,
I wish I could relive
So that I may never forget
though i know i never will
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Still Breathless
This life isn't ugly when all I can see is you.
It doesn't matter if I can't breath when your body pulses underneath me.
And it doesn't matter if I'm not okay when you're here;
I like to wash down my hydrocodone with a straight shot of vodka.
But it's not fair-what you did to me.
You say it's your fault but I want you to know that this never would have happened
Had I made you love me the way that I love you.
I would still be able to taste your freckles,
Burning under my icy tongue.
I could still feel your skin rise eagerly to meet my fingertips.
Fear?
I will make your legs shake in pleasure
Until they cannot shake in fear.
Relapse?
You can't relapse
If I'm holding you above the water.
Lies.
Your lips can't lie
If you're kissing me.
And I don't give a damn if they'd lie without me;
I only want you to lie with me.

Excuses?
Don't fucking make them.

Your figure in the doorway stole the air from my lungs
And you never came to give it back.
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I toyed with titles for this piece for a really long time. 
Scared, terrified, shaking down to the core.
I'm so happy but sometimes can't sleep.
Encouraged, excited, ecstatic, elated...

Why I'm awake to stretch my legs,
Why my cur might pee in a U-Haul,
Why my anklet is unraveling,
Why I never want to cut my hair again,
Why I am who I am today,
Why I am a patriot,
Why I want to visit every town in this state,
Why I want to cry with my best friend,
Why I'm in love with the future,
Why I'm no longer glued to my past!
Why I'm out of bed in the morning
,
Why I smile at every dirt road

If I keep walking
Down this naked walkway,
Naked myself, unknowing,
It will lead me to a door,
And doors lead to answers.
Girls in horror films always open the door,
Even if we tell them not to.
They're not stupid; they're real!
But I still wouldn't open the door..........

But you can.
Come!  And lead me to through gate after pergola after office after doorstep.
Open my chest, my lips, my tongue, and my mind.

Why I'm more in love than I ever thought imaginable.

We don't know if we're staying,
And we don't know if we're going,
So I named this poem honestly.
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One hundred and fifty-eight degrees--
Steam pouring down your curves,
Your lips find mine, desperation,
Sliding down, we're enchanted,
Face rests on your chest,
The sweat is dripping,
Legs are intertwined,
Strength falls away,
Shortened breaths,
Holding.like.glue.
heat is vivid
skin is silk
reaching
craving
holding
power
sweet
no air
heat

Lost.

We stare at our one reflection.

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On freezing granite,
You pull me in.
Your shoulders are Ares-sculpted,
Yet weaken at my touch.
Your chiseled legs buckle
Kneeling over me.
Cologne steals air from my lungs
As my lips part to meet your stone-soft chest.
Dripping in sensation,
My hands taste every curve.
Your chiseled back curves
As your breaths become shorter.
We're frozen in your warmth and your pleasure,
And the way your callused palms pressed my lips into yours.

Kitchen Sculpture
Haven't posted anything on here in forever so I thought I'd write a little bit.  This piece paints a really important moment for me in my relationship and I wanted a way to share that emotion.  Thoughts?
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Hi! My name is Jordan. I love poetry and photography, and this is just a place for me to put all of my thoughts. Your comments, critiques, etc. are much appreciated! <3
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Jordan thanks for the +fav

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:cake: Happy Birthday! :cake:
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Thanks for faving my work!
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You're welcome! :)
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Hi, musicismylife78! Just wanted to drop in and be the first to welcome you to the group :iconpoetryforall:!
If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to either note me or one of the other admin. We will always get back to you as soon as possible. :aww:
I look forward to reading some of your work and seeing you around the group!

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