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I Want You to Shoot Me.

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*"You" as in Her, "Me" as in You*

March2016 Commission. PM me for Commission Details-if it's open or not. It's only for Patrons in Patreons though. 

Had difficulty expressing what i wanted to put in this Picture, the Feel. I didn't wanted to paint a face of horror, cuz she's apparently an expert. I didn't want to give her a Badass feel as well cuz she hasn't even shot anyone so far. I settled with giving her a Look of shock from someone giving her orders, or a look of Worry, or confused.  

I'll let you elaborate about why you want her to shoot you. lol.

There's this Setting i wanted to do where she fires the sniper rifle, and the Grass is floating from the force of the shot. But that would eliminate 75% of her body. 

*That's dirt on her face, not blood*
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I'll start with my main problem, and move onto rest later on:

The gun needs work. It's nice, but it needs work. The angles and lines are off, mostly with the scope and how it's allied with the gun.

The smoke in the background needs a bit more depth, but overall it's still good.

I love how the eye is drawn, and I'll be taking notes from what I see to help my own art.

Blood splatter needs a bit more color, not much, but something to give more... visual appeal.

Over all: I love your work, really good job!