MurDareik

I've been following your work since I got into chapter 2 by chance. I love these comics but as I decided to critique them (putting emphasis on this chapter), I'll try to be as unbiased as I can.

Firstly some remarkable observations:

-Your strongest point is the intensity of this chapter. The look of Lyra when Bon Bon is finally taken into the conversion room, combined with the previous panels it's simply amazing, very well-made.
-You have remained very loyal to the Doctor Who original screenplays. I think that gives the whole comic some familiar atmosphere which is very pleaseant for those familiarized with the show.

Some things to improve:

-Maybe it's a little evil from me to remark this, as it is a minimal flaw, but on the 26th panel, there's some sort of smudge at the cyber-pony leg. Probably you were on a rush and didn't notice. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>

Let's now go on to the general critique:

Vision: You're probably the most loyal artist to the Doctor Who spirit I know on dA. When resembling its stories on your comic series, the script is absolutely full of references to the show and the panels are practically copied shots. I like them very much!
Originality: It's good to see pony-adapted stories from the show, specially when you're dealing with complex characters as the human-obsessed Lyra and the Doctor pony impersonation. But, as it is not completely original I have to remove from here half star. However, as I think I said, you're probably one of the best Doctor Whooves artists on dA.
Technique: First of all, I removed here another half a star just because of my personal opinion on your drawing style. I find it sometimes kind of rough when I refer to pony physiognomy. But as I say, it is my personal opinion and I only shall give it a minimal importance. Your main virtue when talking about your technique is your capacity to create objects that combined on a panel have harmony. You think of the shots, then draw the ponies, make the backgrounds and then the shadowings. You make everything and combined together they become something very pleaseant to read.
Impact: I'll just say I'm making this critique because of the impact the last panels caused on me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>

I hope you continue making such good works. I'll look forward for the next chapter of Doctor Whooves!

Good job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Happy New Year Yuu!

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