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JVt
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Good tech. Very colorful. But it is very difficult to recognize geometry of the aircraft. I think .. the left and right sides are not a...


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JVt
Good tech. Very colorful. But it is very difficult to recognize geometry of the aircraft.
I think .. the left and right sides are not aligned with a center. I advise you ... first draw a simple box, then a simple geometric shape - then draw the final shape.

here is my vision of mistakes
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About model itself, is very good! I would not have the patience to draw this all. I feel a special attention to the details. Engines, pilot glass, small things - this is beautiful.
This is very good drawing, mr. engineer of the vessels of the future.
Keep the work up!

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3wyl Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
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muravei Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2018
Thanks for invitation. I think, I understand the rules.
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LadyArtsy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello, I wanted to stop by and thank you for allowing your wonderful vector into the gallery at :iconelvis-the-king: Its a beautiful addition to the collection.

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muravei Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
thnx!
i'm glad, if you like
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CrashEndburn Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
Great gallery!
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ElecoMoroco Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
your very talented, when are u goingto make more stuff?
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terf Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007
excellent illustrations.
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mohowacko Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
You have a fantastic gallery here. Your command of vector graphics is amazing. I, for one, will watch you to see more of your work.
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flamingzigzag Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2007  Student Interface Designer
you got somr cool stuff
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