thin line pg 38

First of all, I have lived in an English speaking country and embroiled myself in it's media all my life, and I had to look up the word "protocolary". Admittedly, I probably should have known that it's based on the word "protocol" but regardless putting the word "revision" (which most people think of as "correction") is just baffling and I can only assume that where you put "protocolary revision" you meant "protocol" and I'm sorry I'm putting so much emphasis on this one mistake, it was just really confusing. Other than that, you need a period after "moron", and I don't know if this is a mistake or not, but if Zim is telling Dib to check on something it's fine, if not, you need to tack an "out" to the end of it.