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I've noticed that people haven't been telling me what they think of my first story. I do admit that as I look back, I did go a bit crazy. I do mean that I actually did go crazy a little bit. The main reason being my brain having way too much energy from being bored. Some things just don't make sense at all without me telling why, but I do know how to explain them. I need to know what y'all think of it. Besides, if y'all say it sucks, I'll go on ahead and go with this new origin story idea to replace the first one. I generally like how it is, but the way the storyline goes is basically: Main character receives mysterious package/letter, goes to ancient ruins in a different country, finds powerful artifact, & meets the sender of the package/letter. It seems like a classic storyline that may have been overused slightly. And then that's where I go off into something like the last five or four paragraphs of my first story. If y'all tell me it seems good, I'll go ahead and post the second story I wrote after I finish editing it a bit. But please, tell me what you really think about it.  I don't want any pity about it. If it sucks, it sucks. If its good, its good. I just want your honest opinion. Besides, I don't react like a normal person would. Peace!
Seymore is dead in real life. His back legs were badly broken. He was probably never gonna be able to use them again. He had to be put down. Unfortunately, I haven't decided my religion yet, so it's hard for me to believe that he's in a better place.
    Okay, this is my first DA story and it's going to be an origin story of my main OC that I'm gonna use. I'm also gonna do this in first person. There's gonna be cussing in this too. What he likes to be called is Infiniti, but his real name is Garrett Lindamood. He is a 6'4", 23 year old normal-looking white college student. He has black-brown hair, mustache, and brown eyes. He also has a little bit of a beard. He's smart yet strong. He's calm and cool yet furious and fiery. He is also autistic, like me. He prefers the cold, like me, so he dosen't like the summer months except for two things, swimming and no school, also like me. The date is Thursday May 13, 2027 for the start of this origin story. The place, Antlers, Oklahoma, my hometown. His home, the first house you see on Splawn Road presentday, which for me is May 13 2017. He has a brown, black Tabby green-eyed cat with a white underbelly he named Seymore (same as me) which he's had since Seymore was born in April 2017. He is an inventor and an anime fan. Okay, let's start the story.
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    I woke up at 9:00 AM. I was laying in my almost completely blue bed. I looked around my bedroom, at my wooden desk, my 11 posters, my dresser, my retro 2017 stereo and speakers, my 60 inch plasma screen TV, my bedside table, and my Windows 19 computer, while thinking of all that I've accomplished. Since today was the 10th anniversary of when I started to write the first story I wrote to put on DA (this is actually true). I got out of bed to get dressed since I slept in my boxers most of the time. I got into a black sleeveless shirt and flexible cargo shorts. After that I got into my reward stash of Pop Tarts and ate two Fudge packets for breakfast.
    I looked at my Charizard plushie, which I named Vulcan after the Roman god of fire and blacksmiths, on my bed. I brought him/her/it everywhere with me to comfort me. I had to buy it on Amazon so I wouldn't embarrass myself. I remembered all the times it helped me get through. It is very dear to me. I went to my stereo and played my playlist. The speakers are throughout the house, so no matter where you went in it you would still hear it playing. I went across the hall and into my training room. I got my two lightweight steel katanas, which are actually from Japan, out. I practiced drawng from the hips and the back 'till I was used to it. Then I practiced all kinds of moves randomly so no one could guess what came next. I got my fully upgraded UZIs out and practiced with them. I put them up and got my also fully upgraded P90s out and practiced with them. That's when my gut told me to bring my weapons with me. I geared up and slowly checked my house for intruders.
    I sneaked into my room to collect everything I needed or wanted into a duffel bag because I had a feeling this would be my last time in my house. I got Seymore in there, his food, a lot of water, and $6,000 just in case. That duffel bag is huge, so I could fit a lot of stuff in there. I got packed and I almost forgot to get my fingerless gloves on, so I got them on. They look like Ash Ketchum's gloves from the first season, but mine are blue. After that, I went into the hallway again. My mind went into hyper mode. I went into the living room, but everything was the same. The blue L-shaped couch was the same, the 70 inch TV was the same, and the green loveseat was the same. I looked into the kitchen. Everything was the same there too. I got all the nonperishable food in my duffel bag. It looked like a normal 2026 kitchen. I looked at my 2019 bathroom and everything was the same there. I went through the living room to get to my workshop.
    When I went into my workshop, I saw everything was in the same place I had left it in. The laser cutter, the blowtorch, the toolboxes, the work table, and my work laptop. I grabbed my work laptop and my keys. Then I put my laptop in my duffel bag and my keys in my pocket. I saw my leg holsters with my 10mm pistols, and I got them on. I went outside after I checked everything was the same. I texted my sister, Emma who has blonde hair and brown eyes, that I was going to leave Seymore with her and Seymore's sister, Bashful, who is completely black with green eyes. I got in my 2024 white Corvete-looking 4-door car and drove down the road to my sister's place. I left Seymore with her. "Why are you leaving Seymore with me?" She asked. "I have this feeling he won't be safe with me for a couple of days." I answered. I got back in my car and drove back.
    When I got back, I looked around my property. While I was checking the woods, I slipped and fell. When I was falling I saw a portal or a wormhole open up under me. I fell into it. I remember seeing many colors before I blacked out.
~5 Hours Later~
    I woke up in the middle of a forest. It was night time when I woke up. I checked my stuff to see if anything was missing. Nothing was missing from my bag or my shorts. I looked at my surroundings. It was your typical oak and birch tree forest. I checked my phone and it said it was Friday May 13, 2016. I looked at my phone in disbelief. What the f***! I traveled back in time! I thought. I pulled up GPS to get to the nearest town. I saw that I was in Japan. I was about to order a plane when I remembered about my prototype. The prototype is a blue mind-controlled jetpack that's fueled by hydrogen. It's uncharged max speed is Mach 30. I call it P-01. I got it out, put it on, hoped like hell it wouldn't blow up, and started it up. A piece of blue transparent glass extended to protect my face from air resistance. I put on a breathing apparatus. I flew up and saw Tokyo. I turned toward the East and flew to Antlers.
~2 Hour Later~
    When I got there, I saw no trace of Antlers ever existing. Only the interstate that went through Antlers. I went to where I lived, but there wasn't even the road that led to it. I decided to set up camp where I was because it was 7:00 PM. I got my blue tent out and set it up. I started a campfire and got my blue sleeping bag out. I grabbed Vulcan and set him by my sleeping bag. I ate some peaches I brought with me. While I was eating, I realized that I was in another universe. "Holy s***!" I yelled in realization of my predicament. "Well, I was going to build a multiverse teleporter anyways, but I'll need to buy the neccesary components first." I told myself. I climbed into my sleeping bag and held Vulcan close to me as I fell asleep.
~The Next Day~
    I woke up at first light. I streched and yawned. I packed everything back in where they were last night. I turned P-01 on and flew to the nearest town. I was flying at Mach 30 when I saw a military jet flying towards me. I immediately flew down into the trees. The jet circled around where I landed, and I started to charge up the power on P-01. When I let the power go, I went at Mach 65. The pilot  just saw a blur flying out of the trees heading north. Towns and cities went by like blurs. When I got to Chicago, I landed in the area around it. I went into Chicago, and bought the necessary components.
~4 Hours Later~
    After I was done, I walked out of Home Depo. to see the military surrounding me. "Who are you?" A soilder asked with a bullhorn. I simply threw my driver's license at him, and he caught it. "So, Garrett Lindamood can you explain why you're 23 when you're supposed to be 12?" He asked. "It's pretty simple actually. I fell through a wormhole and into this universe." I answered. "I need more info." He told me. "OK. Basically I fell through a portal that transported me from my universe to this universe, and your universe is 11 years behind mine, but my hometown dosen't exist here." I told him. "OK. I don't understand a word you just said." He told me. "Can I have my driver's license back please?" I asked. "Sure." He answered as he tossed it to me. "Peace! Idiot!" I told him as I grabbed it, since I was charging up P-01 this whole time. I flew to Alaska, so I could build in peace.
    When I got to the most remote place in Alaska, I was low on hydrogen, so I couldn't waste this chance. I started to build it when I had the idea of putting it into a car to make it more awesome, but that could wait for when I get back home. I finished it, and traced the wormhole back to my universe from this universe. It looked like a white Samsung Galaxy S14, but it was more than that. I activated it and went back home.
It was 1:00 AM Saturday May 15 when I got back. Everything was as I left it. I got Seymore back from Emma. When I woke up the next day, I got dressed, and looked outside. I saw other versions of me outside with what looked like freaking hovercopters, so I got my weapons and went to see what they wanted from me.
    When I went outside I was greeted by the leader Garrett. He had a tux on while I had the clothes I had on yesterday. "Hello, I'm the leader of the Republic of Garretts." He told me. "That's obvious from the suit. What are y'all doing here?" I asked. " You remember that portal three days ago?" He asked. "Let me guess, y'all tested me to see if I'm worthy of traveling the multiverse?" I asked. "Yup. Now you get the powers every Garrett gets when they succeed. You get the abilities of super speed, super strength, heightened senses, the ability to turn your eyes and hair different shades of blue, superhuman reflexes, the ability to control your aura, and to change your age at will." He told me. A bright light suddenly surrounded me. Then I felt a burning pain in my whole body. I couldn't tell how much time the pain lasted, but when it was over, I was about to faint. I was on the ground kneeling. I was weak. "Now we'll wipe the memory of this whole morning from your memory, but you'll know about your abilities. This is to see what happens when we do this." He told me coldly. "F*** you." I answered. "Billy, push the button." He told one of the other versions of me. The version of me named Billy pushed a button in a hovercopter. Then I blacked out.
    I woke up in my bed, and I felt great hate for an image of me wearing a tuxedo. I suddenly had the urge to punch a tree, so I got dressed to do so. I chose an old pine to punch. When I did, I punched straight through the pine. I pulled my hand back out to look at it in disbelief. I ran back to my house, and I went straight into town in a couple of seconds. Then time slowed down when I ran back. I got into my house to look in a bathroom mirror. When I did, my hair and eyes were light blue. Then I started to feel old. I freaked out, and wished to be back to normal. I saw myself become 23 again and my hair and eyes go to their normal colors. Time went back to normal speed. I was relieved, so I went and fixed some cereal for breakfast. I dropped the spoon I was going to use, yet I grabbed it before even a twentyfourth of a second passed with the hand that was holding the cereal bowl while my other hand caught the cereal bowl. I didn't tell my hands to do this, they just did. I was amazed. Then I heard my sister's car coming down the road to go to town. That's when I heard her singing to Rock That Body by Black Eyed Peas. I went to the window and saw that her windows were up, but I could hear her clearly. I then realized what was happening. My body was becoming superhuman. I then realized this could be useful while traveling the multiverse.
    I was excited at the thought for some reason.  Well, I did fantasize about it and my fetish, voreraphilia. Then I put it into the form of stories on DA. I thought. That's when I remembered I had a story to upload. I went to my Windows 19, and uploaded the story. I then wrote another journal to tell people that I was taking a break for 45 days to see the multiverse. I then got the device, which I call MT, which means Multiverse Teleporter, out, and built one for my car. I can now call my car MTC, Multiverse Traveling Corvette. I packed up for 45 days of vacation and possible battling. I drove down the driveway that I had made. I drove on the dirt road a little bit until I reached my sister's place. I took Seymore back to my sister, so I don't have to worry about him. "Where are you going?" She asked. "Where ever the winds of travel take me." I answered. Then I got into my MTC, with Vulcan in the passenger seat, and drove to the highway. I set the MT to portal mode and random mode. I activated it and drove into a portal.
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    And that is the end of the story, but don't worry there'll be more stories to come. Criticism is welcome, and if I misspelled any words please tell me. Share with friends if y'all want to. Okay, that's all I can think about right now to ask y'all to tell me about. I hope y'all enjoyed it! Peace!    
Infiniti's Origins
I was finally able to publish it! I thought I was gonna have wait to get a flash drive and upload it at school! Now to see how people like it.
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I've noticed that people haven't been telling me what they think of my first story. I do admit that as I look back, I did go a bit crazy. I do mean that I actually did go crazy a little bit. The main reason being my brain having way too much energy from being bored. Some things just don't make sense at all without me telling why, but I do know how to explain them. I need to know what y'all think of it. Besides, if y'all say it sucks, I'll go on ahead and go with this new origin story idea to replace the first one. I generally like how it is, but the way the storyline goes is basically: Main character receives mysterious package/letter, goes to ancient ruins in a different country, finds powerful artifact, & meets the sender of the package/letter. It seems like a classic storyline that may have been overused slightly. And then that's where I go off into something like the last five or four paragraphs of my first story. If y'all tell me it seems good, I'll go ahead and post the second story I wrote after I finish editing it a bit. But please, tell me what you really think about it.  I don't want any pity about it. If it sucks, it sucks. If its good, its good. I just want your honest opinion. Besides, I don't react like a normal person would. Peace!

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Joe-Roberts Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
:+devwatch: Thanks for Watching, and welcome to deviantArt :)
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MultiverseTraveler Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017
Thank you. Just so you know I'll be uploading an origin story of my main OC (which is me, but 10 years older and it's in 2027.) as soon as I figure out how to on my phone.
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