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I've noticed that people haven't been telling me what they think of my first story. I do admit that as I look back, I did go a bit crazy. I do mean that I actually did go crazy a little bit. The main reason being my brain having way too much energy from being bored. Some things just don't make sense at all without me telling why, but I do know how to explain them. I need to know what y'all think of it. Besides, if y'all say it sucks, I'll go on ahead and go with this new origin story idea to replace the first one. I generally like how it is, but the way the storyline goes is basically: Main character receives mysterious package/letter, goes to ancient ruins in a different country, finds powerful artifact, & meets the sender of the package/letter. It seems like a classic storyline that may have been overused slightly. And then that's where I go off into something like the last five or four paragraphs of my first story. If y'all tell me it seems good, I'll go ahead and post the second story I wrote after I finish editing it a bit. But please, tell me what you really think about it.  I don't want any pity about it. If it sucks, it sucks. If its good, its good. I just want your honest opinion. Besides, I don't react like a normal person would. Peace!
Seymore is dead in real life. His back legs were badly broken. He was probably never gonna be able to use them again. He had to be put down. Unfortunately, I haven't decided my religion yet, so it's hard for me to believe that he's in a better place.
I've noticed that people haven't been telling me what they think of my first story. I do admit that as I look back, I did go a bit crazy. I do mean that I actually did go crazy a little bit. The main reason being my brain having way too much energy from being bored. Some things just don't make sense at all without me telling why, but I do know how to explain them. I need to know what y'all think of it. Besides, if y'all say it sucks, I'll go on ahead and go with this new origin story idea to replace the first one. I generally like how it is, but the way the storyline goes is basically: Main character receives mysterious package/letter, goes to ancient ruins in a different country, finds powerful artifact, & meets the sender of the package/letter. It seems like a classic storyline that may have been overused slightly. And then that's where I go off into something like the last five or four paragraphs of my first story. If y'all tell me it seems good, I'll go ahead and post the second story I wrote after I finish editing it a bit. But please, tell me what you really think about it.  I don't want any pity about it. If it sucks, it sucks. If its good, its good. I just want your honest opinion. Besides, I don't react like a normal person would. Peace!

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Joe-Roberts Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
:+devwatch: Thanks for Watching, and welcome to deviantArt :)
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MultiverseTraveler Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2017
Thank you. Just so you know I'll be uploading an origin story of my main OC (which is me, but 10 years older and it's in 2027.) as soon as I figure out how to on my phone.
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