Drifting above a vast green planet in a damaged orbital POD, Commander Wyatt is running desperately low on resources, patience and time. Faced with little choice but to descend on this unknown world, he sets out to find what he can in the hope of repairing his dying machine.
Written by Ian Beck: iangbeck.blogspot.com Illustrated by me Created using SketchBook Pro and Photoshop, built using the Madefire Motion Book tool.
Very nice work and an enjoyable read. The way the background music built up over those last two pages was spot on. It made me want to keep reading.
From a build point of view, I would look to reduce the number of you use pages in madefire. I know it gets a bit messy trying to build multiple reading pages on one madefire page, but it means that the music runs throughout (rather than the constant fading in and out you're doing at the moment).
Hey thanks very much, Ian did a great job on the story and issue takes a great twist n turn in the storyline. Visually it has a really nice contrast but thats as much as I can say, there are a couple of sneak peeks on my Twitter page thou
Great work! U have Caught my Attention, loved bot the art and storyline so far. I wonder though did the pod set him down close enough to any of the things he is looking for or is the 5 hours enough time to travel a 3 - 10 miles round trip and still have time for him to pull back anything he is looking for to help the pod?
Thanks very much, Ian has done an amazing job with the story and the music which makes illustrating a lot easier and a lot of fun Really glad you like it and #2 is in progress, the roughs are almost completed