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"I want you to be mine" Draco whispered so (Y/N) couldn't really understand what he said.

"What?" (Y/N) said turning around to face him.

"Do you want to be my girlfriend?" Draco asked confidently, expecting her to say yes.

(Y/N) didn't know what to say. Draco had only talked to her a few times in class, mostly to get answers for assignments. She didn't mind giving him the answers, seeing as they were both Slytherins. She did wonder why he wasn't mean to her like he was with everyone else. Now she knew why.

"Well?" Draco asked impatiently.

(Y/N) knew that he expected her to say yes without thinking. That is what any other Slytherin girl would have done. She needed more time to think about her answer. After all being Draco's girlfriend would cause a lot of changes for her. She wasn't sure if she was ready to deal with that.

"I can't give you an answer right now."

"Why not?" Draco asked looking surprised and a little hurt. He wasn't use to a girl making him wait.

" I want to be sure I make the right decision" (Y/N) said slightly smiling at him.

Class was dismissed and everyone started leaving.

"Fine, but you will end up saying yes to me" Draco said a little harsher than he meant to as he stood up.

"How do you know that?" (Y/N) said raising her eyebrow at him not liking the tone of his voice.

He quickly regretted that he was unable to control his emotions while talking to (Y/N).Draco reached over his desk and gently grabbed (Y/N)'s hand trying to ease the tension between them. He smiled at her then kissed the back of her hand. He hoped she would forgive him for speaking to her in that manner.

(Y/N) couldn't believe what Draco did. She never imagined he could be so kind. Her heart started pounding faster the moment he touched her.  Draco's smile was enchanting. She always thought his eyes were beautiful but even more now that they were looking right at her. His hand felt strong and comforting. (Y/N) developed goose bumps when Draco's big soft lips kissed her skin.

He was relieved when he saw her expression soften.

Draco released (Y/N)'s hand then proceeded to leave. When he got to the door he turned around and smiled again at her.

"I know because I can be very persuasive" he said as he winked at (Y/N) then left the room.

(Y/N) rose up and gathered her books. She couldn't help smiling to herself as she touched the spot Draco kissed. As she was leaving she thought Draco might be right about him being persuasive. She was starting to think that she may have been wrong about him.
First fanfic I ever wrote. Read so many wonderful stories here on Deviantart wanted to try it myself. Anyways Enjoy
Here's a link to chapter 2…
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Kat-Tries-To-Art Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017
I saw the title and I thought "Is this anything like The Disappearance of Hatsune Miku?"
SeoulSJ Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016  Student Artist
Great story! I've read it over and over more than three times already, no kidding. But hey what year is this story in? Is it third or fourth?
mugglewitch75 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016
I don't specify a year so the reader can decide that on their own, but I'm glad you like it so much. I appreciate every time you read it!
Nitilove Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
I love this :3  Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] Squee Bounce 
BAZINGA2014 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've read this fanfic before and I couldn't stop myself from reading it again. It's well written and I loved it. Clap 
mugglewitch75 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
Wow I'm so happy you like it that you've read it more than once. Thank you.
Sorry that I haven't finished it. I have extreme writers block on this one. 
But I do plan on writing more for it as soon as I think of anything.
Heartshackles Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Love. :heart: Great descriptions. :)
mugglewitch75 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
Thank you for the complimentHeart 
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
love the whole story!!! very well written!!
mugglewitch75 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
You are so kind thank youHeart 
Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
Aww I can't wait to read more!
TaraMoonStar Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're doing great! : D I enjoy this a lot! Keep going!
nixdex Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow I really liked this! :iconkissingplz: great job! 
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