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Ariagaming - Forsaken world by MrZielsko Ariagaming - Forsaken world by MrZielsko
My latest project for Aria forsaken World,

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The design in general looks decent, it's very well detailed, most of elements and textures fits perfectly with the theme.


First thing I've noticed when we are on this page is the placement of the 3 pics on top. I guess it's to show some ingame screenshots, it's look a bit messy and confused in front of the background character. Imo that should be more interesting to put them between the footer and news category.

Your different typeface's size need more contrast, you can see that your titles on News items have got the same size for your desc category, and even with the menu's fonts (:
And maybe on your descriptions: your letters need to be closer, to save more space.

A little thing again is to add more contrast and more visibility on the "Server is online", the best way should be to replace it below the "Login" button or the "Download" button c:

How about graphic fx ? Basically, luminosity and contrast look pretty good, buttons and menu are well realized. What it could be better is to remove the background pattern (the little light points you see c: ) because that simply feels the header and the character flat. There is also this glossy light on "Download" and "Login" buttons, too flat and clean imo, that should have a blur fx or something like this :)
Last thing is that some elements are aliased (character - Download button fx)


I hope that will help you and I just have to say you to keep up this kind of creative design, and btw if you want to put a critique back on one on my design, you will be very welcome :)
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xahare Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014
Hi MrZielsko, pleaser add my skype , i want to buy your template. My Skype: khuongduy.thai

BR & Thanks you
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SiemaNatala Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
W zasadzie założyłam konto tylko po to, by to napisać. Jak dla mnie jesteś mistrzem w swoim fachu. Oby tak dalej! ~Twoja fanka Sweating a little... 
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MrZielsko Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
Dziękuje :)
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Jozio Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Praca fajna :) Ale nie gryzie cię to że menu jest pod fooldem ? 
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MrZielsko Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
Nie, takie było założenie :) Dzięki za komentarz
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onejian Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
That is great~
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MrSmi5tt Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
good work :)
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LoomarNet Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
This looks awesome, i like the shapes of the buttons and the navigation. Really Hot ;)
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LoomarNet Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Today i looked again and there is just 1 little thing that weirds me off xD
The Skull above the "Account" Button, should be a straight looking one, that would look better i think.
That left looking one fits not to the rest, cause the rest is so absolutly perfectly centered.

But its just my opinion. Anyways i love what you do, Huge fan :)
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OutlawNinja Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Looks great, that Ahri art is sensational.
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