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Mermaid in the Desert by MrSynnerster Mermaid in the Desert by MrSynnerster
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I would change the value of the mechanic’s shorts—they should be lighter or darker to differentiate them from her skin better. The cloth appears to be a sheer material. Or her skin comes with its own belt loops!

There appears to be a tangent between the bottom outer rim of the water tank and the mechanic’s breast. Also, her arm wrap is forming another tangent with that second pair of clasping robot fingers on the left (because of their similar color). Again, lightening the values of the mechanic’s arm cuff/wraps and the mechanical fingers would help break up they way they merge into one contiguous shape.

I can’t tell if there is a second robot helping to carry the tank being obscured by the grease monkey, but since the “hands” match those of the robot on the right, I could rightly or wrongly make that assumption.

The demonstrative guy in goggles—his arm also forms a tangent with the main robot’s arm, blending them into one form. If they were silhouetted (cutout) figures, they could be imagined in this composition as one four-legged character.

The concept is very imaginative and lights many story questions in my mind.
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abelundercity Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Get her a glass of water?
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MrSynnerster Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol.  Sounds like a good plan.  lol.
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017
Great
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MrSynnerster Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much.
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Snowdog-zic Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017
Well done.
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MrSynnerster Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much
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Snowdog-zic Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2017
Your welcome.
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