Coming soon?

I may make this a comic, so give me ideas what how I can improve chapter 1 of ES and other characters

In the beginning of chapter 1 in my comic, they go out for a walk really early in the morning, just to see some beautiful glowing flowers that bloom once a year during the sun rise, this gives a reason for Crystal to be tired lmao

they find an egg in a tree bring it with them, it hatches during when the flower bloomed and sun rising. This gives Speed the idea of calling the new eevee “Sunshine”

that’s all so far for chapter 1 in the beginning section I don’t know about the rest of chapter 1