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Chaotic Noir piece no. 1

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the 1st part of Chaotic Noir , a short love story about two rival mercenaries, An on and off Space pirate, and a Time ninja.
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MrBallistic's avatar
its called a preloader
MrMonday's avatar
its called easy toon. animate your own avatar.
MrBallistic's avatar
and uh, how big should i make it. It gives hight and width but not pixles
MrBallistic's avatar
is there any tutorials for that
MrBallistic's avatar
easy toon, thanx!
Faoux's avatar
Dammit that's slick......i think i'd love to know the story more in depth:)
Cal-B's avatar
that totally rocked. Really good
darkseraphaerith's avatar
This is a really awesome animation sequence, but, like everybody else it seems, I sorta gave up on the text o.o;; It's really cool overall, though. Good stuff!
ayato's avatar
I swear, someday I'm gonna learn how to use flash and I'll do something cool like this too...
MrMonday's avatar
I'm glad I can inspire you to reach higher limits.
ayato's avatar
Yep. I'm-a reachin for the stars...
realqueenbetty's avatar
Incredible! The direction is excellent and the animation is seamless, though I have to say that the fact that the text and some of the images move by too fast us a little annoying. It's paced just like a classic noir film, and the part with your name and the bullets flying across it was just classic. I also love the dialogue scenes because of the style in which you did them; showing only their heads from the eyes up, letterboxing the scenes, having the text run by on the bottom. About the animation: the fast scenes, the fight scenes and the scene where the guy unsheathes his sword, were excellently done. Some anime aren't even animated that smoothly!

Regarding the style in which you drew this: I'm sure some people would ask for more color and embellishment, but I say that it's simplicity makes it more stylish and prevents the viewer from getting distracted by flashiness. Over all, I have to say that this was pretty incredible, and I so can't wait to see the finished product! :boogie:

Betty
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I see you like my animations. I thank you for those words. You made my weekend, I don't think I could repay what you said in words . No, that will be ineffective I really CANT say how much I thank you .. Now I know what I'll have to do tonight.

Not sleep.
realqueenbetty's avatar
Yes, I do. Very much so. XD You're very welcome, but bear in mind, taht you merited them. Not sleep? But sleep is good and its keeps your skin looking not-old!! :D

Betty
kuroken's avatar
Two friends converse in a psuedo french cafe on a sunny day in a space colony called Pandore, a lazy waystation in the depths of space that is located on the outer regions of the terra-luna orbit T-shirts 3.00* (Starbucks)

O_o yes, I got so bored, I went and watched it so many tmies, I know what that block of text says... o_O
DarkZombie's avatar
I love it for the hand drawn look. *clings to the animation*
Synkedam's avatar
Omg... omg... o...m...g....
AWSOME dud! you rock... really. I "love" your style. It's so... fluent
but, there is one thing, textes pass too fast. I don't have time to read neither than anyone else have... make timing better..
MrMonday's avatar
don't worry I'll be making the changes on the next installment of Black Coffee. Oh right . I didn't really mention the name of this series have I ? Well, now you know.
NoFaithInGravity's avatar
omg!!! its teh leet!!!
heh heh.. three dollar tees? sweet!!
obey the cookie?
that was awesome!!!
westwardcloud's avatar
rofl thats fucked up. nice work though
Ky-'s avatar
Reminds me somewhat of Cowboy Bebop...^^ I love how you make everything flow so smoothly. Very cool.
Zombie-Graves's avatar
Chaotic Noir...one of my favorite styles of story telling! Non-linear stories are the best! :D
Weirdo9's avatar
Really nice noir piece right here. I like the fluent animation you do. 24 is a good frame rate.
TheSpanishFly's avatar
No idea what the fuck just happened but it was ill.
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