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MrBoltTron

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  • Sep 14, 1995
  • Finland
  • Deviant for 7 years
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Thanks Toxic.Geek for this awesome pixelicon!

Good morning or good day or good evening, deviants and people. My name is MrBoltTron also from flickr and YouTube and aka MrBT from BZPower. My favorite hobbies are track cycling, music listening, and MOCing. I build Bionicle related MOCs, mostly OC MOCs nowadays. I revamp sometimes canon Bionicle characters (hardly). I rarely build MOVs (My own Version) of other people's characters. Have a look of my MOCs, cheers~


You can catch me also from:
Flickr: www.flickr.com/photos/11494632…
YouTube: www.youtube.com/channel/UCR8p6…
Instagram: www.instagram.com/toabythalis/

Favourite Movies
Pacific Rim, Transformers 1, 2 & 3, Marvel movies, The Dark Knigh trilogy, Bionicle tetralogy, District 9, John Carpenter's The Thing, Terminator 1, 2, 3 & Salvation, Godzilla
Favourite TV Shows
The Simpsons, House, Family Guy, Ed Edd n Eddy, Under The Dome, Angry Birds, Transformers G1, Transformers Prime
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Linkin Park, Eminem, Fort Minor, Hypocrisy, Flo Rida, The Rasmus, Fall Out Boys, The Beatles, Bullet For My Valentine, Red Hot chili Pepper, Nickelback
Favourite Games
Borderlands 1 & 2, Ratchet & Clank, Jak & Daxter, Sly, Infamous 1& 2, Resistance trilogy, Super Mario Bros. 1, 2, lost levels, 3, NSMB DS & Wii, Super Mario 64, Galaxy & Galaxy 2, TLOZ Ocarina of Time, - Majora's Mask, - Twilight Princess, -Skyward Sword
Favourite Gaming Platform
Wii, PS3, PS2,
Other Interests
Robots, Mechs, Mechas, Steampunk

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

So here we have Kupira Akisame in her 2.0 version? Well, I'll give ya a constructive criticism <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> So this Kupira Akisame MOC 2.0 is pretty much some what different than the previous incarnation of her. Personally, there are something that I have to say honestly.

As for the construction, I do like the "new" upper torso built of her, even though that Inika shoulder as chest armor is frequently used on various MOCs. However as for shape of torso, it works quite well. However, I would maybe lean more into Kupira's previous incarnation's chest armor, Furno XL helmet is something new what I haven't seen before. But otherwise the whole construction of upper torso is more cohisive, less back bulky and solid looking, plus, I really like her back design now.
As for waist, I kinda prefer again for Kupira's first version's, since it creates a feminine shape, because of those bohrok eye parts. And Krana mask as crotch armor kinda fits her more than her current form's, just as a personal opinion. And I have nothing too much to say about those red skirt armor on her current version, basically just same looking, but they fit well for her.
Talking about her limbs, firstly about her legs. While the upper legs are basically same, but I personally appreciate those lower legs (Piraka lower legs) on her current version being more reasonable and sleaker looking than the previous version of, dark blue colored Skull Spider Masks as front of lower legs. However the back of Piraka lower legs might have been put on more time to cover the gaps on them, they're just a bit blah for me. The feet however are a bit irritating to see on Kupira, scale wise they're slightly too big for her.
About the arms, I'll give ya my tip of my hat, but the arms are far better now. Despite her hands (which are honestly meh for me), the upper arms are well customized and seems to be an original design going on her. Lower arms are okay, nothing too fancy going on those.
Talking about the head, honestly the head is weird looking. However I appreciate that you changed her head design, since the previous version had a bit unfinished look. But still, the lower "jaw" of Kupira's is mainly the part that gives an odd looking head design, just a personal opinion. The horn or her antenna(?) is maybe a random piece for her head.

Talking about colorscheme, well, what do I have to say about it? It is well balanced, but the yellow color was a bit random addition at the first glance, but looking them now again, it doesn't bug me anymore. Remember what I was talking about Furno XL helmet as being chest armor? Well, as for color, I'd lean more into dark blue colored chest armor, but as an original design being chest armor, well, it goes like 50/50.

For her weapons, even though Kupira's previous form's weapons were cool looking, but I approve more into her normal looking sword type weapons, they fit more into her profile more honestly. Maybe one gripe about her weapon, the main one, I don't know but personally I think Ninjago katana blade would maybe fit more for her main weapon.

To sum up this, I think Kupira Akisame 2.0 has been some what drasticly improved. I honestly have hard time to think about her upper torso's Inika shoulder armor as being chest armor, whether the part has to be replaced or keep it as balanced colorscheme. The limbs are vastly improved, mainly her upper arms, lower legs just kinda? And the head needs to be improved, the lower "jaw" especially, in my opinion. However I do appreciate that it has more sleaker and solid looking construction going on, and the colorscheme is also well balanced, plus her weapons. Overall, Kupira Akisame MOC honestly is somewhat well drasticly improved MOC!
This has been MrBT, and hopefully my criticism was helpful to improve your MOCing skills in future <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> MrBT out!
Kupira Akisame, the Demon
The thing with your Kalikiki MOV isn't bad, but like I said earlier, the build has original built (which is something new for me, forgot to say that on critique) and I like it, but at the same time, it is unnecessary to build her like that way. Like, I appreciate that you replicate her character, using her some artwork references as help, but she is way too complex. Now, I know that my critique is controversial.

But as I said in critique that the color scheme she has, she is Kalikiki. But, mostly I said is her appearence (that term I forgot as well). Mainly it just the complex build of her, but at the same time it is still nice and I like it, but as Kalikiki, it is a controversial angle. It has pros and cons.

Plus, not sure about my English? Well, I have SLI (Specific Language Impairment). This is my first critique, and I tried my best to tell you my opinion about this MOV of Kalikiki.
Bionicle MOC: Kalikiki(a Kaiba Gal character)
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okay, so... Where should I start with this MOV Kalikiki..? Now, I have to be honest that this Kalikiki MOV is pretty okay and good looking, but she lacks some... Well I will talk about those soon.

The built has pretty original vibe going on, which I approve that. Everything here has own original builds, such as limbs and torso and the head. Almost it has original built, and why is almost well, the lower arms I have seen before, but other than that, everything else on Kalikiki MOV own original build. But, I'm talking about visuality soon.
But, the color scheme, well you nailed it well, almost. The stomach area, not quite sure on that, I would prefer blue CCBS shell part, but oh well. That belly ruby thing is kinda cool detail though.
Anatomically, it is pretty well catched from her drawings.

However, there are few of problems as well. Well, the head of Kalikiki, well okay, I admit, that the head is really cool looking. But it doesn't say Kalikiki to me, visually. But it still has own style which you came across, and that's good. But the biggest problem really is the look of Kalikiki, I understand that you built her that way. Of course it is your style and way how you built it, but it is way too complex for her look. Now, I don't mean it negatively, but I think it should have been "simplified", so she doesn't have complicating design.
Secondly, I really dislike to say, but I feel, that your version of Kalikiki is unfinished, some of them. The thighs of her seems gappy, okay because ot is the way you built it, and those blue socket joints on her lower back, I think there should have been other parts.

So, how should I sum this up, well, I like that you built with your way, so it has original built, but I don't like the fact it doesn't look Kalikiki to me, almost. Physically it is fascinating, but visually really don't describe Kalikiki, most of it. This MOV Kalikiki describes something else character, to be fair, but it is still nice looking though.
Bionicle MOC: Kalikiki(a Kaiba Gal character)
It does give HF vibe rather than Bionicle. Although this version is outdated, here's the current: www.instagram.com/p/B7NxNqip3g…
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