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They paid 500 robux for this.
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ArtemisMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Decent. Nice shading on the renders, good enough composition. The top text looks too minimalist for the rest of the ad's style, though, and the bills are just too plain. Not sure what the bottom text serves as. If it's part of the composition, it's too light. If it's a watermark, it's too noticeable. In fact, if it's a watermark, it probably shouldn't be included in a commercial design. 5/10
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Mrbacon360 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the critsism, but just a few things are I agree the bills are too plain i could've made them better (maybe I should have) but idk. The bottom text is a watermark I use and I put it on all the ads I make so people know who I am and they can contact me if they want ads. The logo makes it look bad but they asked for it so I had to put it on. Again thanks for the feedback I hope you have a good day. :D
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ArtemisMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good job on taking criticism so well. dealt with other designers who'd flip. have a good one yo
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Mrbacon360 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ditto :D
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