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Put on a uniform. Show em who's the boss.

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I over thought the writing and under thought the art on this page ( it was drawn during my extended down time this year and I didn't feel like redrawing it - sorry), but I hope it keeps the story chugging along. It was good practising my space and planets stuff again too.
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:iconmaulmachine:
MaulMachine Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
Yeeessss I need buddy cop Mordians.
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
Shit yea
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:iconvoiceofrob:
VoiceofRob Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2017
And yet the Sargent still saw fit to celebrate the occasion 
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2017
Pretty transparent.
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:iconvoiceofrob:
VoiceofRob Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2017
Speaking of which. New stuff hath been added
Got a little heavy in a hurry 
pastebin.com/u9kLWw3v
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2017
Very very entertaining.
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:iconvoiceofrob:
VoiceofRob Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017
Kind of you to say. Let me know if you have any critique. Some of my other readers say they have a difficult time telling who's speaking during dialogue that I write.
New stuff hath been posted. 
We're at the final lap. Also I put something temporary at the end, it will be erased before I write in the final chapter. 
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017
I find your dialogue easy to read tbh. I look forward to reading the next bit of!
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:iconvoiceofrob:
VoiceofRob Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017
Any particulars on the feedback? 
Likes dislikes? 
Specific parts that could be added or different?
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2017
I'd need to give it another going over. Honestly, any character 'inaccuracies' are part of the appeal of fan fics. Different people interpret different characters their own way. I don't want to mess with that.
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:iconfish-with-a-knife:
Fish-with-a-Knife Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tsundere Sargent (say that ten times fast)
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017
It doesn't do too badly with my particular speech impediment.
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:iconpsykerscum:
PsykerScum Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not your buddy, guy
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017
I'm not your guy, friend!
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:iconvoiceofrob:
VoiceofRob Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2017
I'm not your friend, pal!
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:icontheeldarfarseer:
TheEldarFarseer Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017
Hey, art ain't shabby, and the story's doing more than chugging. As usual, love the expressions, especially the ones in the second-to-last panel.
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017
That is deffo the best panel.
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:icontheeldarfarseer:
TheEldarFarseer Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2017
I know I'd use Min's face as a reaction pic.
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:iconwise-idiot:
Wise-Idiot Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
And then the sergeant dies in the first battle.

Such is war.
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:iconvoydspektre:
Voydspektre Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
I can't quite describe that face in the second to last panel, but I somehow know exactly what feeling it's portraying and I love it.
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
Being very much caught off guard
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:iconbeachhead1973:
beachhead1973 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
i love this;

"CALL ME THAT AGAIN"
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
Only slightly louder but with weight. Lara would learn that tone.
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:iconmasterix2442:
Masterix2442 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
Can't wait to see their misadventures! Also love the lines in the last panel!
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
It should be fun for a little while.
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:iconlost-one-60:
Lost-One-60 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Quite silly.
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:iconwinterous:
Winterous Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Konoko as fuuuuuuck!
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
For real. I can only assume i had her in mind subconsciously originally.
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:icondarianblood:
Darianblood Featured By Owner Edited Oct 6, 2017
I just love this nonstop fountain of withering scorn, one day it might even get through to her :)
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Well, something made her a little more dour.
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:iconrushlan:
Rushlan Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
she made it!
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Yeah! She had it in her.
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:iconspartan-wolf:
SPARTAN-WOLF Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Barely!
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:icondaggerhammer:
Daggerhammer Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Nothing like a terminal dolt in the party...... they either terminate everything else or get terminated and stop being a dolt.  TECHnically  a win-win situation!
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:iconsillymadman:
SillyMadman Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
I can foresee many more headlocks in Lara's future.
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Daily ones.
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:iconmadurai:
Madurai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Can't wait to LOOK INTO HER EYE
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Totally.
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:iconcptstrider:
CptStrider Featured By Owner Edited Oct 6, 2017
Damn, five strips (and probably a lot of time training together) and still she  treats her like scum.

I hope that in the next she will say something nice to Minhelm, or as nice an enbittered Mordian sergeant can say...
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
She almost smiles in this one.
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:iconbrony4:
Brony4 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
That face just screams "I am boned."
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
It's gonna be rough.
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:iconneoillumini:
Neoillumini Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loving more Minhelm backstory. And with her uniform she is complete Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] 
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
It maketh the woman.
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:iconkais86:
Kais86 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Do it, I dare you! I double dare you!
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2017
Garven looks like she has the upper body strength and height to do a chokeslam on someone Minhelms size.
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:iconkais86:
Kais86 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
It helps that she's a hobbit.
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2017
5'7"?
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:iconkais86:
Kais86 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017
By comparison to him? Yes. 5'7" is that of a hobbit.
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:iconmr-culexus:
Mr-Culexus Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017
Yeah, Garven is closer to 5'11'' but is obviously stronger.
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