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MozartsNemesis's avatar
thank you so much for the fave, the kind words, and the llama. I really appreciate it.
Kinthinia's avatar
Ah, rather refreshing! I like all the references to the literary authors and characters.
ragnaice's avatar
I enjoyed this though you're putting out some pretty big shoes to fill in ;) :thumbsup:
MozartsNemesis's avatar
Thank you.. I feel like anyone can fill those shoes if they pick up the pen, and have the strength of courage to bare their soul for the world to see.
MozartsNemesis's avatar
Thank you, all of you, for your kind words, and your editing of my often horrible grammatical skills. Lol. Will be fixed now.
curlscat's avatar
Hate to be a nitpicker, but it makes me sad when I see a great poem like this with silly grammatical errors. Stanza two, line two: it should be you're instead of your. Stanza four line three: its, not it's. It's means 'it is' shortened.
Wow! I really like the first and second to last stanza, they really captured some emotions there!
Though, two small grammar problems, in line 6 it should be "you're" and not "your;" in line 15 it should be "its" and not "it's." Otherwise, this is really well written!
xlntwtch's avatar
:+fav: ... :iconcongratulationplz: on the DLD Pick of the Day! It's easy to see why this was chosen.
You show us how writing always shares the soul, often post-humously, but still here to peruse and enjoy.
MozartsNemesis's avatar
Thank you so much.. I am so honored to be chosen for DLD.. thank you again.
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
wizillusions's avatar
Nicely written.

My favorite lines.

Sing a song of scalliwags,
of reckless, raging passion.

What matters most, my dearest friends,
is that you bare your soul.
And so, by giving parts of you,
you are again made whole.
MozartsNemesis's avatar
Thank you so much for your insight and continued support. :)
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