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the sun shine and your eyes sparkle
and the way you look
and i startled
the scenery from here overwhelm me
as i sniff in the evening breeze
away from the cold harshness freeze
and my mind sets with ease
becoz im with you
its hard to go home
everystep of the way i walk
ever moment we talk
comes back in mind
and i wish your lips to kiss
but sadly all is miss
and now im im shatter with disbliss
How i wish i could kiss her~~ hehehe joking
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crackedmirror Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2003   Writer
sweet Heart
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discombobulate Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2003
WoOo.. NICE!.. So u feeli like kissing someone.. lol... :p (Lick)
Beautiful poem.. Heart
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lost4everwthoutu Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2003
nice poem you have here, definatly creates me a picture!! if you get the chance stop by and check my poems out!! :) (Smile) Hug
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