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My eyelid wide open
when i first saw her behind the canteen
her beautiful hair long and dark
that charming smile
makes a loving memory of my teen

i prayed and prayed
everynight on my bed i laid
pray for her happiness
pray that one day she'll be mine
and her image will never fade
in my heart

it feels like heaven
when she walk across me
she cloud my mind twenty four seven
and every second its about her
everynight i dream into

but just then the worst could happen
i just found out and then i saddened
all this time my prayers not answered
a friend betrays and chances are slim
she'll never will accept me
a broken heart it seem

as long as she is happy and forever smillin
i hope one day i will hold her hand
ill write ur name on the beach sand
im crazy for her, yes i am
ouh what the hell i dont give a damn.
its a true story till an a$$hole fren of my took her away from me
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discombobulate Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2003
"ill write ur name on the beach sand
im crazy for her, yes i am
ouh what the hell i dont give a damn."

Oouch.. that's hurts.. nice poem.. very much in detail..(can imagine how faz feelin) hmmmm..
I got u!! ;) (Wink)
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khamush Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2002
sad... ill write ur name on the beach sand
i love that line... great words
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