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Dear me
Pardon my unfaithful sins
which i see you as an angel
with wide open wings
As you wash away this tainted heart
let it be clean
looking deep into your eyes
trying to find your feelings
and the readings of my obscured mind
WHich i contemplate
Deep inside i find
A red beating heart that shines
As i pluck the stars for you
down on my knees and ask you to be mine
i was sitting down by the cafe and suddenly this inspired me
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lovin' the plucking
of stars like posies
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jr-ewing Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2002
skill....
poetrying away...
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mortichro Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2002
omg i think i have to stop using this pic b4 everyone thinks im promoting road kill
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arseface Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2002
That poem is really good, but I don't understand it, because i'm too shallow. It's very good from what I did understand though. Great job.


Yes, that picture is awesome!
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met4m0rphosis Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2002
omg..
that picture's sick..
poor poor thing
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somdomguy Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2002
lmao!!! Crazy shot! +fav Is it manipulated??? Great stuff, nice poem too.... :) (Smile)
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