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This ladies and gentlemen is what I have been neglecting Darastrix for XD
This is the animation I have been working on my 2d animation assesment at University. Its not great, but its ok. Either way I worked very hard on it and I'm quite proud to have made it XD
I never got to show it to anyone before putting it into the coursework submision box though, so I'm somewhat nervous as to how it will be recived.
But yeah! I greatly encourage critique on this piece so that I may improve for my next animatio :D Im aware of quite a few problems but dont be afraid to reiterate them.
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:iconanimationvenky:
animationvenky Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011   Filmographer
hi this is venky
im looking for flash animation work

email: animationvenky@gmail.com
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DracosStarlight Featured By Owner May 2, 2009  Student Filmographer
lol...very nice job there
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Thankyou kindly :)
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:iconhumanofprey:
humanofprey Featured By Owner May 1, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great animation!! I like the musics you chose and poor radio, i liked it bouncing. And the characters are great too :)
Nice work :thumbsup:
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Thanks, I'm glad you like it :) me and my sister had fun picking the music XD
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:iconjxw:
JXW Featured By Owner May 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
that was great ^^ the animation was good and the music you chossed with it was hilarious XD great work x
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Thanks XD It could have been better though, I think, if there were less scenes with no actual animation happening.
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:iconletdragon:
Letdragon Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
I think it turned out fine Morgy :)

I don't know much about animation so I can't really critique this.
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Thanks :) Dont worry about lack of technical knowlage, though. Animation is soemthign that anyone can pick at. If something isn't moving naturaly you can just tell.
Kids are especialy harsh critics of animation, I find XD
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:iconletdragon:
Letdragon Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
You're welcome

Hmmm good point XD
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:iconcrazy-painter:
Crazy-Painter Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
Amazing! It's fantastic, especially for your first full animation (with sound x3). I hope you pass your module with this! XD
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
I hope so too XD Im wondering what Im up against. I've only seen the animation of one of my classmates so far.
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tisuigi Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
Hey! I like it! Particularly the swing at the end, when he takes out the radio!

If you're asking for honest critique, the back and forth walkcycle needs to be slowed down just a touch, he appears to be sliding.
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
Ah, thanks. I was ahving alt of trouble with that walk cycle. I animated him walking on the spot and becuase of the nature of the program he didn't actually animate while I was setting the speed. I had to keep jumping in and out of the preview after each alteration, which isn't so great for precision. Maybe next time, though... XD
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tisuigi Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
ITs all good. I noticed the 'falling' prep work you did come out here, which was perfect.

So whats next for you? Aside from some more darastrix... (evil eye) ...whats your next project?
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:iconmorgoth883:
Morgoth883 Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
I dont really know :O
I've got a few disjointed ideas floating around for animations. One thing I was thinking of doing is making a whole series of these animations and stringing them together like a sketch show.
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tisuigi Featured By Owner May 1, 2009
That could work... You'd need an intermediate character to do a sort of introduction type thing for each, I think that'd be pretty cool.
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