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Darastrix Page 23 by Morgoth883 Darastrix Page 23 by Morgoth883
Darastrix Page 23 is now up!
the actual page can be found here! Dont forget that Darastrix now has its own funky url, www.darastrix.co.uk
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humanofprey Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work, i love Rose :love:
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2009
Thanks :D
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JXW Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
this is really getting good and so much detail on the characters ^^ keep it up x
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009
I shall try my best! Thanks :D
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JXW Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
ur welcome ^^
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Arrodynamic Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009
Much as I agree with the above for it being pretty darn hilarious, I've got to criticise the dialogue a little. In the fourth panel, Rose's talking starts awkwardly.
It makes perfect sense if you start reading from the second sentence of her speech bubble, but the opening line "Yeah, calm yourself Sophy" sounds like it should be a sarcy response to something spoken about Sophy. However, there isn't anything said that would merit such a response. In my opinion, it breaks up the flow of the page simply by making the reader go "why did she say that?"

Criticisms aside, it's a good page, revealing elements of Pyotr's character and also developing the bond between Rose and Sophy.
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009
Oh? I didn't think it seemed that way. Perhaps its just up here, but people often start a sentence with 'yeah' after someones said something stupid. In that sort of 'yeah, sure.' kind of way.
glad you enjoyed the page, though :)
There was a line I only afterwards thought of adding to Pyotres frame that I'm kiking myself for not adding XD
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aqua-dragon Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009
oh my god XD This is probably one of my favorite pages up to date if you allow me to say so. Why? The character development in this page is a-ma-zing. I had a good laugh at the perversions once I understood what the heck they were talking about. (really, it took me 5 minutes to figure out xD I'm so slow).
Seeing Sophy more bold than we've seen her in the previous pages in an interesting development.
Though... why was this "prerogative" exclusive to.. lilac Darastrix if I understand correctly? Wonder why now. x3
Anyways. Awesome page.. love the lighting, love everything x3 Also, the tiny line there Pyotre is saying made me giggle too.

Keep if up Simon, love it <33
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009
What a lovely detailed comment :D Sophy can be quite bold with Rose soemtimes ;) Shes the only person she really would be bold with and Sophys the only person Rose would really let get away with being bold with her.
As for the Lilac ';Perogative', you'll just have to sit tight and wait for an explnation ;p
Im really glad you like the page! :D
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aqua-dragon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
pffff, want explanation xD

Welcome!
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curtsibling Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
The character interplay is charming as ever!
Very nice page!

PS
I like how Rose says "I'm not and ancient Vorelian!"
Which roughly translates into "I'm not a furry!"

:)
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009
"I'm not a furry!"
Oh the Irony! XD
Glad you like the page, thanks :D
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Tukono Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nicely done :)
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009
Thanks ^^
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DracosStarlight Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009  Student Filmographer
very well done, keep up the great work
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Morgoth883 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009
Thanks ^^ I shall try my best!
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DracosStarlight Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2009  Student Filmographer
cool
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