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Anecdote of Error

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Dot Bullet (Grey) - F2U! Pronunciation Guide Dot Bullet (Grey) - F2U! 
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Map of Alemi and West Batea
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Warning: Old art is old art at the beginning, you may need some eye bleach haha
Title for the comic I'm making- Anecdote of Error.
Stick around for more!

Contructive criticism is very welcome for any of these pages.
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ToddNTheShiningSwordHobbyist Traditional Artist
HEY YOU'VE UPDATED THE DESCRIPTION :XD: :laughing:
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morganicfoodsHobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe
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ObelisHobbyist General Artist
Love the brush you used for the letters, as well as the fact that the cover isn't oversaturated with color - makes it so much easier to read.

Ooh, it seems you have invented your own writing system? :o Or have you borrowed it from somewhere?
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morganicfoodsHobbyist Digital Artist
Oh thank you! The writing system is the conlang I made, Batean.
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ToddNTheShiningSwordHobbyist Traditional Artist
I realize why the two rows of bubbles in the description are locked, now. :O No previous or first page to go back to. Won't it be great to get to the point where the bottom row of bubbles is locked? :w00t:
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morganicfoodsHobbyist Digital Artist
That point is very far off, but I still have hope. One day...
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ToddNTheShiningSwordHobbyist Traditional Artist
You've almost made it
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morganicfoodsHobbyist Digital Artist
30%(12/40 scenes complete) of PART ONE does not seem like almost to me.Waaaah!  Much sad.
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:reading:You know, for a low effort cover, :XD: this is actually fantastic. I'm not lying when I tell you that seeing this cover a few weeks ago when I came to your page when you +Watched me made my actually want to read this comic. NOT KIDDING! SO here I am! I planned on coming back! And since I read stuff on your Profile and on the other pages that said you welcome constructive criticism, and this comic looks like something I could offer that on, and since it's interesting enough for me to want to read all the pages of it and do that (I know, 'cause I previewed a good number of pages 2 weeks ago to make sure!) I'm going to offer feedback on every page you have up so far! Unless I get the feeling that maybe you don't want critique or talk from me anymore... ^^;

No critique I can offer on this cover, of course! :XD: Except that it's a cool (no pun intended) use of color in what's mostly a black-and-white comic, and it's got a really engaging title!:reading:
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Your comment makes me so happy! I wanted to do something for the cover that I wouldn't look back on and go, "yikes! old art!" and that I could keep up for as long as possible. 
I'm glad you are intrigued by my comic, and I'm am so happy that you are taking the time to read it! When you said you were gonna offer feedback on my pages I did a little dance around my room :D 
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First off, I'm glad my Comment made you happy, because I didn't know how you'd respond. But I guess I STILL don't know anything because THE REAL TEST is how you react to the Comments I've sent you now! :XD: >:3 Those have a lot more critique than this one did.

I delayed on sending you more Comments at first because I was kind of sleepy and in a silly mood, and I wanted to make sure you liked what you got before I tried to send you more.

Your profile says you want to become pro as big adult and want to do scary things after 50. :la: It is not acceptable for a big boi adult to do a small dance. :P
But yep I'm going to try to tackle every page until I run out of pages. Then I'm probably going to be out of gas, OTL .
Hopefully some of my advice will help you get a few more people to get into your comic. I saw one of your original fans in the comments deleted their dA, so now you need a new one. :P

I really like your reason for making this page like this. This page is just such a smart art idea! :lightbulb: I just don't know what else to say!
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morganicfoodsHobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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