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Seafront Mage by MooshieMoo Seafront Mage by MooshieMoo
Look guys- I finally have a fursona.
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Thelightsmen Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heya! I saw you on Project comment and decided to give you some insight on what I think about this picture.

I like it.
I can see the style fits the mood just fine, especially the eyes and the face, they look so detailed it gives off a feeling of seriousness and melancholy, a little sad, but at the same time quite relaxing; the lightning overall is fine, and does a good job setting the scene as a whole, I see most of the colours gravitate more towards purple, which in my opinion is better to represent the night; you have a very good grasp in drawing fur, hands, and paws, also the folds on their clothes add even more realism to the piece and complement the rest of the details in the character pretty well! extra points for that magical fire effect and the antlers!

However the thing that I believe needs more work here is the background, certain aspects make it difficult to guess where exactly the character is; the ocean for example is well done, the waves look seamless and fluent enough, but the horizon that divides it from the sky is too sharp, I think it's better to fade the water in the distance, making it darker to give a more powerful feeling of distance; at first glance I thought the character was at the beach, but on closer inspection I saw that little shadow at the left and that crack on the right, leading me to the conclusion they were near a cliff, to avoid confusing the viewer, I recommend you try adding more details to the ground, like some rocks, some grass (not much) or even some more cracks on the ground; as for the sky I think the moon needs to be a little more brighter, since apparently it's the only source of light (you should also position all shadows based on the position of the moon), to make it more interesting (and this is depending on whether this is near a city or in the middle of nowhere) you could add some stars and constelations (even planets, if the pic is set on a custom universe) to make it prettier, and also making it more different from the ocean, thus adding more contrast.
Finally, I strongly suggest you try making the picture wider, because the mr rabbit here seems to be looking at something instead of the ocean or the moon (it's also not looking at us), something interesting that I'd probably want to see too, so It's always a good idea to extend the view in the direction the character is looking, even if there's nothing there, it helps relieve our curiosity, and we also get to look more at the scenery.

Now I'm not an expert on this stuff, but I hope I can still somehow help someone to get better at something they like doing, have a nice day!


PD: This comment lacks emoticons...       F2U | Example of a Nice Smile | OSMTthere.
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ArtKing45 Featured By Owner May 23, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
amazing work
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MooshieMoo Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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PheobeTheMinion Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2017
This is so good! :O I love the shading! 
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MooshieMoo Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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RowanFyre Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Does Fursona have a reference? c:
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MooshieMoo Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not yet c:
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RowanFyre Featured By Owner May 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
nyeeeh I can't draw them accurately then. But maybe we can do an art trade some time ;v;
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MooshieMoo Featured By Owner May 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would love to ;u; I should have her ref out today
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RowanFyre Featured By Owner May 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
sweeeeet

Just want to let you know though, I'm still in finals week so it may take me a bit to be ready to do a trade. I just know I will want to once I have the time

Wanted to make that small but for some reason coding isn't working with me today.
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MooshieMoo Featured By Owner May 3, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just let me know when you have free time!!
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RowanFyre Featured By Owner May 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Will do!
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