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Little Bird by moosekleenex Little Bird by moosekleenex
I made a poem!
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no2hb Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
good job
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Karrakula Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2018  Professional General Artist
It's wonderful. Pretty sad tho, but wonderful. Huggle! 
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Little9tails Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2018
This is truly fascinating and the intention of the poem and the whole piece of art definitely got across. I also think that this a picture of humanity itself
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HadiImmanuel Featured By Owner May 6, 2018
It was beautiful! <3
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Gavador Featured By Owner May 5, 2018
It reminds me of a story about three brothers chained up in a cave. They have lived there their whole lives. Behind them was the opening of the cave that light would shine through. On the wall they'd see shadows of what passed by and give them names. Then one day, one of the three brothers was released. He left the cave and learned the truth about the nature of the shadows. Full of knowledge he returned to his brothers and told them all the wonderful things he saw. But they refused to believe him, they said his eyes had been poisoned. So the brother left knowing his brothers would never face the truth.
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pixiegirl2 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Professional Writer
this was beautiful
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thebaldbeardedpoet Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! So the idea behind this is so great! 
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MarshMAEllow Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful... I aspire to reach that moment when the Bird had finally tasted what it was like to see those things it was apathetic of. I see myself in that little bird...
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GGoya Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2018
Great poem about life and the search for freedom. 
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APoeticVampire Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes you will. 
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AmyC-islay Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2017
it is so sweet
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NickTheNightOwl Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2017  Student General Artist
This poem is amazing, such a wonderful read,
It sends out a message that everyone needs.
Your talent is great, I am amazed,
A great take on a bird in a cage. :heart:
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Virusir Featured By Owner May 5, 2017
Honestly, I can relate to this comic-poem on a personal level. It speaks how dangers it can be when one is content in staying within their comfort zone, never exploring the boundaries of their existence when push to the limits, charging headfirst to the murky waters of the unknown. Instant fav! :squee: 
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ClownEntity777 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
deep stuff
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TalortheGreat Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
this broke my heart
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Verity96 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2017
Amazing. I love your style.
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frosty0078 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017
I love it!
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lilsheepie345 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Student Digital Artist
IMMA CRI
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful job!
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FloffyAlpaca Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's not sad nor happy...but i like it!
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CLCanadyArts Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2016   General Artist
Awww, too sweet. I love the panel where the bird is shocked, such a great expression!
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RavenThing Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It was great :) Kaori Crying Icon 
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ProfessorSheepie Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Such a nice poem, very sad though.  :)
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PinkoPrint Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Wow!! This is so wonderful!
I love the little images along with it.
Very nice poem!
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GrandMazterXeng Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015
FEEL!!   w00t! Love Love Love 
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Minority83 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful :)
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sketchwithtiff Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
BUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!
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rayedragon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015
TELL US!
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seprira Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015
The bird will die outside. It was probably bred for being indoors.
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NostalgicChills Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You don't understand metaphors very well, do you?
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ProfessorSheepie Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Killjoy.
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Tunnel89 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015
wow... this is really a touching story... okaay.... 
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SnowStormNinja24 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Student Writer
Really beautiful~ :clap:
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Invader-Cyn Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Hobbyist
la in love la in love la in love la in love 
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drawcreator Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
Awesome!
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dareme Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015
Lovely :rose:
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janefab Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
that's a wonderful story :) 
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Serendipity1889 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
awwwwwwwwwww not getting over this every time I see it it's like the first time !
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xthedisneydorkx Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Ahh so touching ^^**
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theartsofdreams Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Beautiful.
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Pika-Pilot Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
This. Is. Art. At its finest.
Well, it's great literature within a well drawn comic strip. Rather inspirational too!
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Joobleboogle Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student General Artist
I love the determination on the bird's face when he/she decides to be free again.
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FrostbiteIceDragon Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Spectacular!
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123Opensesame123 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Very nice. Thank you. Thank you VERY much.
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Rand0mStalk3r Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Good Job! is this you're First poem?
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kotone-aea Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Very cute and yet deeply meaningful at the same time! This made my day :D
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bitter-knitter Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Professional Filmographer
Your drawings are amazingly simple and elegant. Beautiful.
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MusicAndArtIsMyLife Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
I find this beautiful 
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Alyxt-Elixier Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student General Artist
This is very poignant and sweet!:3
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TimMcJimFromPL Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Amazing. Beautyful and sad. Meaby try to make another one; about cage with open door? ;-)
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