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Chapter 1: Monkey In A Strange Place


It was a pretty uneventful day at the science lab. You'd think the life of a mad scientist who is also a monkey-human hybrid would be all excitement and transformations. Well, some days it is and some days it isn't. In fact, the most that was going on today was me cleaning up around the lab. In fact, I thought that would be the most exciting thing that happened today, little did I know how wrong I was.

I swept up various broken beakers and spilled chemicals. Luckily, my broom was transformation-proof, so I didn't have to worry about it turning into a giant monster or something. Using the broom, I swept up after the experiments of this week. As I did so, I heard some odd sputtering nearby. "Huh?" I walked over to a nearby wall-mounted sink, which seemed to be where the sputtering was coming from.

I bent over and looked down into the hole, yet found nothing out of the ordinary. How strange, but this was definitely where the sound was coming from. I rolled up the sleeve on my lab coat and reached my right hand down into the drain. To my surprise, a hand reached back! Some sort of gloved hand emerged from the hole in the sink and grabbed hold of my furry arm. Before I could react, the hand tugged on me with one swift motion. I was promptly pulled off of my feet and into the drain itself! I was somehow dragged inside as my reshaped so I fit down the drainage pipe.

I was pulled downwards, not exactly knowing where I would end up. To my utter shock, I found that the arm was pulling me towards what appeared to be a large Warner Bro logo. The arm pulled me into the logo, causing it to stretch like rubber. My fuzzy monkey body was pushed tightly against the rubbery logo, right before I was dragged through it. I then noticed that the arm was pulling me towards the ground! As I fell through the sky, I noticed my body appeared to be 2-dimensional now, as if I was a cartoon!

While I was falling to the ground, the arm let go of me! I fell towards the ground and noticed an empty bottle seated on the ground below me. I thought this was going to be my end, that I was going to go squish against the ground! Instead, my body somehow plummeted into the empty bottle, my large body somehow cramming into a tiny area. My body filled up the bottle, yet was squished against the tight glass. My hands and hand-feet were pressed firmly against my glass imprisonment, as was my face and the rest of my body.

Just then, I noticed two feet walk in front of me. They appeared to be rabbit paws of some sort! Just then, I felt someone picking up the bottle. I was raised into the air by the hand of whoever was holding me. I caught sight of the person's body as I was being pulled upwards. Whoever this was, she had a nice fur-covered body with some amazing assets! I was hoisted up to eyelevel with the person and soon found myself staring at a most improbable sight. The face I was staring into was the yellow-furred gorgeous face of the lovely lapin face of Lola Bunny! Lola was a character from the hit Looney Tunes film known as "Space Jam". I noticed she was also holding a fishing rod with a gloved hand on the end of it, which was probably what she used to pull me in here in the first place!

Wait... If she was here, did that mean I was in the world of the Looney Tunes. She frowned as she stared at my bottle prison. "Darn it! I was supposed to catch Porky Pig, not some random monkey! Oh well, out you go, little guy." Lola then turned the bottle over and started pouring me out, as if my whole body had suddenly become liquid. The liquid that encompassed my being was poured onto the ground, but quickly reformed into my usual simian form. "Well, that was weird!" I said while scratching my butt. "Ha, you're a toon! It should be normal to you." Said Lola with a smirk. "Toon? I'm not a toon!" Lola grinned and wiggled her nose. "You look like a toon to me! All 2-dimensional and shaded, definitely a toon." I glared at her and crossed my arms. "I'm not a toon, I was in the real-world just a few minutes ago until you pulled me in here!" Lola smirked and raised an eyebrow. "Oh, I see! Well, it's been said that sometimes pulling an anthropomorphic animal through the portal can sometimes cause an unexpected change in being to toon. I hear it's only temporary, of course!" The rabbit said with a smirk.. What she was saying, was it true? Did travelling through the portal somehow toon-ify me? It appeared to look that way. "Well, you look..." I started to say as I eyed up Lola's form.

I noticed her breasts seeming much more massive than they were in the film. Likewise she had a bit of a bigger butt and some amazingly wide hips. Her fur was soft and luscious and was colored caramel-brown. Her hips were wide and butt was rather large, something that wasn't accentuated in the film. Her assets were contained with a white top and black shorts. "You look gorgeous!" I exclaimed as I eyed Lola's form. "Well, I get that a lot!" Exclaimed the bunny as she flicked one of her rabbit ears. Her eyes were a piercing shade of light-blue and a mane of luscious blonde hair sat atop her long rabbit ears. "So, Mr. Toon-Monkey, I'm about to go play some basketball for practice. Care to join me?" I stared at the bunny, curious as to why she would invite me. "Any specific reason you want me to play B-Ball with you?" I asked with a smirk on my face. "Nah, no reason. Everyone else is busy today, so I need someone to play against." I grinned and ook-ed. "So, I guess that responsibility falls to me then?" Lola nodded and smirked. "It certainly does! However, before we play I suggest you put on some pants." I raised an eyebrow as I stared at her in confusion. "Why would I wear pants? It's not like you can see anything down there with all that fur covering it!" Lola frowned and crossed her arms. "It's the gentlemanly thing to do! After all, what if there's an "accident" why we are playing? I just feel it more appropriate you wear a pair of pants!" I sighed and decided to do as instructed. I followed Lola into the gym and she lead me towards the men's locker-room. Once we arrived outside, she cleared her throat. "Inside Porky's locker is a pair of sweat pants he never wears. I suggest you put that one, and then we can proceed to our slam-jam!" Lola said with a sultry grin on her face.

I couldn't resist that attractive rabbit face, so I entered inside the locker-room. I walked over to Porky's locker, grabbed his unused pants, and put them on. Lola was telling the truth, these pants feel like they've never been worn ever! Heck, they don't even look like they'd fit Porky. Either that, or the pants of a toon stretches to fit any size of legs. I assumed it was the latter, considering how crazy the physiology of toons is. After putting on the pants, I looked down at my outfit. The pants seemed to accentuate my lab-coat very well, much to my surprise! I exited the locker-room immediately after putting on my pants and I noticed Lola on the other side of the gym, rooting through a bin of basketballs. As she did this, I stared at her rump which was pointed straight up in the air. I grinned mischievously as I had the idea to give it a firm smack. After all, I can't be a good monkey all the time! I slowly crept up behind Lola, but was denied when she abruptly stood up.

Lola frowned as she pulled a basketball out of the bin. "I can't believe it! All the balls are deflated except this one!" I looked at the basketball and noticed that it appeared to be glowing. "Uh... That ball doesn't seem normal, Lola." I said as I walked towards Lola. "Huh? What do you mean?" Lola asked as she stared at the ball, seeming not to notice it's ethereal appearance. Once I was face to face with Lola however, I noticed a strange energy emanate from the ball. Two tendrils made out of translucent light emerged from the ball and moved towards our necks. One of the tendrils made its way to my neck and started slowly rubbing against it. I was strangely relaxed by this! Lola was in the same predicament as one of the tendrils rubbed her neck as well. It was a neck massage unlike anything I had ever received! Just as quickly as it began, it soon ended. The tendrils receded back into the ball. I looked downwards and noticed that I was now holding the ball for some reason. Not only that, but stuffed into my shirt were two other basketballs! Wait, I wasn't wearing a shirt before. I dropped the basketball when I had a sudden realization that I wasn't quite myself right now.

I looked at the massive basketballs in my shirt, only to soon realize they were breasts! They were contained within a rather tight white tank-top. Seated atop my legs were a pair of rather tight shorts. These shorts were wrapped around some rather large hips and a truly massive rear, both of which now belonged to me. I had long slender legs and thing delicate arms. I found that both my arms and legs were covered in luxurious caramel-colored fur. Clinging to my furry hands were a pair of tight white dress-gloves. My monkey tail had been replaced by a short stubby rabbit's tail. My hand-like simian feet were missing and in their place was a pair of bulky rabbit foot-paws. About the only part of me that was still monkey was my head, which was now attached to this rather voluptuous form. I still had my masculine simian voice, but I was completely female in every other way.

It didn't take me too long to realize that I had become Lola! Wait, if I was Lola than that means Lola was me! I looked over at where my body was standing and found Lola, who's head was situated atop my head. Lola looked in awe and shock at her new body. She or rather he, possessed a body covered in shaggy unkempt monkey fur. It didn't take him to long to notice how bad his new body now smelled. After all, monkeys aren't known for taking daily baths. Wriggling around from Lola's backside was a rather long prehensile monkey tail. Lola seemed to have trouble controlling his new tail as he seemed to be flailing it around uncontrollably. Lola ripped open her lab-coat and started to sweet as he gaze at her bare hairless monkey chest. The rabbit twitched her nose in a rather annoyed manner as he continued to examine his form. Her caramel-colored rabbit face clashed horribly against mangy-furred body. I couldn't help but snicker at the rabbit-headed monkey's predicament. After looking at Lola for a bit, my eyes gravitated back down to my breasts. I've never been the kind of simian to behave under any circumstance, so suddenly possessing a pair of breasts was something I had no problem in taking advantage of.

I started to grin like a cheeky monkey as I raised my gloved hands to chest level. I pressed my fabric-covered hands against my jugs and squeezed tightly, cheekily snickering while doing so. Lola spotted my doing so and angrily bared his buck-teeth at me. "What are you doing?! You just don't grab a girl's equipment without permission!" I stuck my tongue out at the bunny-headed monkey. "Well, I'm currently the girl in question, thanks to that basketball over there. You're just the smelly male monkey at the moment!" I said with a smirk as Lola angrily twitched his whiskers. Lola looked down at the glowing basketball and proceeded to bend over to pick it up. Lola stared at the glowing basketball. "Hey, this is the basketball that was used by the Monstars to steal the talent of the NBA basketball all-stars!"

I was barely paying attention to Lola, instead choosing to continue groping myself. I wiggled my sizeable tush and soft little cotton-tail around as Lola frowned at me. "You're having a little too much fun with my body, I think we should switch back right now!" I shook my head and continued to squeeze my borrowed assets. "Sorry, but you're the one who pulled me into this cartoony world in the first place, the least you could do is let me borrow your body for a while!" I then went back to groping myself. I squeezed my large stolen melons as Lola angrily walked up to me. Before she could stop me however, I removed my hands from my chest and grabbed him by his long monkey tail. "What the heck?!" Shouted Lola as he panicked. "Calm down, little monkey! I'm just going to borrow your body for a bit and you are going to enjoy being a monkey. Well, you will after some alterations." I said with a smirk as I took my index finger and pressed it against the mid-point of Lola's monkey tail.

Lola's eyes glazed over as if he was under a spell and he proceeded to fall onto all fours making monkey sounds. A clueless expression was painted across the bunny-headed monkey's face as I smirked. Lola scratched himself as he walked around on all fours like the feral simian he was. What I had used on him was a special technique, by pressing the pressure point on a certain part of the body you can cause that person to behave like the animal they are. In this case, Lola was acting like a dumb silly simian. It would only last a couple of hours, but would give me time to fully experience Lola's body in all its busty glory! I looked over at Lola who was pulling a banana out of his lab-coat pocket and mindlessly peeling it. I decided that since Lola was a dumb monkey at the moment, I could go out on the town with her body and enjoy being a gorgeous female bunny!

Chapter 2: Toon On The Town


I hiked up my tight-fitting shorts and walked towards the exit door of the gym. My hip gyrated from side to side and my large jugs bounced up and down as I walked towards the exit. I exited the gym with Lola's body and tight-fitting exercise outfit in tow. Lola was still inside the gym, though I doubt he would cause much trouble. My lab-coat pockets were filled with enough bananas to keep him busy for a good fortnight. After leaving the gym, I wandered around outside and noticed various toon characters.

Most of them were staring at me, enamoured by the gorgeous sexy body yet confused by the addition of a male monkey's head. It was an awkward package, weird yet very enticing to the common toon. I passed by a cartoon coyote who let out a loud whistle in my direction. I looked over at the coyote at the pants-less coyote who was eyeing my well-endowed physique. Normally, I would be put off by this but male toons have been known to be very untactful when it comes to talking to women.

The coyote walked up to me and bluntly asked, "Hey baby, how about a kiss?" Now, any normal person would say no to that, but I'm always keen on trying new things. Kissing a strange cartoon coyote should be on everybody's bucket list! A smirk formed across my wrinkly monkey lips. "Sure!" I exclaimed in a deep masculine voice. The coyote seemed confused at first by my change in voice, but shrugged it off and puckered his lips. As the cartoon coyote puckered his lips, I noticed the size of his lips growing to cartoonish proportions. His lips were massive! Regardless, I puckered my lips and bent over to kiss the coyote. To my surprise, he pressed his large puckered lips against my entire face and kissed my entire head at once!

After giving me a large slobbery kiss, the coyote pulled his head back and wiped his mouth. "Thanks, Toots!" Said the coyote, before hauling up and giving me a hefty smack on my large booty. The impact smack nearly knocked me off balance and left me with a sore fanny. The coyote then walked off as I rubbed my sore rear and wiped the saliva off of my face. Afterwards, I continued on until I heard a very familiar voice. "Ah' say, lady, you've got more curves than a race-car track!" I recognized that southern drawl.

I turned and found myself face-to-face with the anthropomorphic cartoon rooster known as Foghorn Leghorn! The rooster smiled and threw his arm around my slender shoulders. "Foghorn Leghorn?! I'm a huge fan!" I shouted as I excitedly giggled at the prospect of meeting a character who I adored. Foghorn seemed somewhat off-put by my masculine face and voice though. "Ah appreciate you having heard of me, but your appearance is something I'm unfamiliar with. Ah' say, no offense lady, but you've got a bit of a masculine façade going on." I shook my head in response. "Oh, don't worry about that, it's just a disorder. It's called "Head-Swapitus", it means I was born with the head of a male and the body of a woman!" I felt bad about lying to the rooster, but I didn't want to make him feel uncomfortable with my appearance. "Ah' see what ya' mean, I believe one of my nephews has that! Poor kid, head of a rooster yet the body of a hen. He got picked on so much growing up."

I kind of felt bad now, I didn't even know Head-Swapitus was a thing! "Regardless though, ah' want to take you out for dinner!" Exclaimed the rooster, causing me to open my eyes up wide in response. "Wait, what? We just met!" Foghorn chuckled as he rubbed his beak against my face. "That kind of thing is trivial to a toon, relationships in Toon-Town are more of a "Forced Relationship At First Sight" kind of thing. Toons foster relationships very fast. Speaking of relationships, may I have your name?" I blushed and bashfully hid my head. "Well, I'm uh... Jamla Bunny!" I decided I needed a feminine sounding name and since I had Lola's body I may as well borrow part of her name. "Ah' say, that sounds familiar but I can't quite remember where I've heard it before. Ah' well, let's grab some dinner all the same!"


I grinned and was about to agree with the rooster, until I remembered what I was wearing. I was clad in sweat-covered basketball clothes that clung tightly to my well-kept fur. "Sorry, but I don't think I'm adequately dressed for that." Foghorn grinned and grabbed my left shoulder. "Ah' can easily fix that, ma'am!" And with that Foghorn spun me causing me to spin around in a tornado-like flurry. I became dizzy as I spun like top. After spinning for a bit, I found my movements starting to slow. My spinning stopped as my world came back into focus. I looked down and found I was wearing an entirely new outfit! I was clad in a black dress that tightly hugged my curves. This dress showed off an ample amount of cleavage, making it clear I wasn't wearing a bra.


The outline of my large butt could be seen beneath the silky fabric of the back of my dress. There was also a hole in the back of my dress that allowed for my tiny cotton-tail to wiggle about freely. I found that my rabbit paws were now adorned with black high-heel shoes. My wrinkly monkey lips were caked with lipstick and I found that my brown shaggy hair was now much longer and well-kept. Foghorn smiled as he marvelled at his handiwork. "The best way for a toon to change clothes in a hurry is with a good spin! Ah' say, you clean up nice, Jamla!" I blush and smile at the rooster's compliment. He returned my smile with a grin of his own, while at the same outstretching his feathery hand towards me. I grabbed his hand and held it tightly as I walked hand-in-hand with the rooster.


As I walked with the rooster, I wondered why he wasn't wearing anything fancy for dinner. Then again, Foghorn usually didn't wear anything at all so it didn't seem all that strange to me. Foghorn lead me to a fancy restaurant as he nuzzled his large beak against my wrinkly monkey face. I giggled happily as he did so. I struggled to walk at first, having difficult properly standing in these tight high-heel shoes. I eventually did the hang of it, though. We then entered the ritzy restaurant and were greeted by the doorman. Foghorn, being a wealthy successful rooster, he was allowed in without any sort of dinner appointment.


Foghorn and I were then escorted to a lovely blue table in the middle of the restaurant. Afterwards, we ordered our dinner. I went with a lovely salad with sliced bananas in it. Foghorn ordered something called "Birdseed Rice" which was basically refried birdseed in special sauces. It didn't take us too long to eat and I definitely had a good time with Foghorn. However, after dinner I was in for a bit of a shock. As I sat on my chair, Foghorn walked around to the side of me. He bent over on one knee and took out a small box. Opening the box, Foghorn revealed a diamond ring inside! "Ah say, you'd make me the most happiest rooster in the world if you said yes!" Wait, what?! We just met, yet he's already fallen that head over heels for me? I knew toons could be rather quick when getting into relationships, but how could one date turn into this? I stood there speechless, I didn't want to marry a chicken!


What do I say to the guy though? Here a rich and powerful rooster was offering me a hand in marriage. What could I really say to that? I decided to say nothing as I stood up and reached down towards my legs. I pulled off my high-heel shoes, threw 'em to the ground and made a mad dash for the exit. I ran as fast as my bunny paws could carry me as I quickly raced back to the gym where Lola was.


I ran down several blocks in a minute of minutes, due to my rather powerful rabbit legs. I sprinted like a mad rabbit until I reached my destination. I arrived at the gym and tried opening the door, only to find it locked! On top of that, there was a note on the gym door. To my surprise, the note was addressed to me! I grabbed the note with my gloved hand and read it. The note read: "Dear Jam, I am not upset about you stealing my body earlier. In fact, Bugs and I did want to "experiment" a bit with our relationship. I've found that your simian body actually has a lot of advantages to it. Since you stole my body, I thought it only fair that I steal yours at least for a few weeks or so. I'll be sure to give it back, but I may as well have some fun with it in the meantime! I hope you enjoy my body as well, most guys sure do! Anyway, I wish you a good evening and hope you have fun the next few weeks. Signed, Lola."


Huh, and here I thought nobody wrote notes anymore! I was a little confused as to what I should I do now, I figured I may as well go find Lola and take my body back. After all, no one steals from this monkey, not after he steals something himself! I was going to take my body back, no matter what! However, before I could leave I felt a hand squeeze my backside. "Ah say, Jamla! You left in such a hurry! I'll take your eagerness to leave as you saying "Yes". After all, who could say no to gentleman like myself?" The rooster then scooped up my feminine form in his arms. He held me tightly in his wings as I struggled to get out of his vice-like grip. He wouldn't loosen his grip, not even for a second! It gave me the feeling that Foghorn was taking a few too many lessons from Pepe Le' Pew!


I had forgotten that when some cartoon characters fall in love, they become so completely enamoured with a certain individual that they ignore all common sense! I continued to struggle in Foghorn's grasp as the rooster hugged me tightly. "Ah' say, you're going to love being my monkey-headed bunny bride! We'll do all sorts of fun rooster things, like pecking chicken-seed and raising a family of monkey-headed chicks..." Foghorn continued to talk as he hugged me even tighter. I tried convincing him I wasn't interested, but he was so smitten he ignored me! I knew there was no way getting out of it!


The next day, I was forced to stand at the altar in a flowery white wedding dress. Foghorn was right beside me, still naked as usual wearing nothing but a red tie situated below his neck. I stood there awkwardly in white high-heel shoes. I teetered back and forth, still not being entirely used to my new footwear. What made things even worse was my rather revealing wedding dress. Much like the black dress from earlier, it showed an ample amount of cleavage. My long thin legs were showing through my dress, causing many wolves seated nearby to howl. Lola was seated in the crowd, with a look of supreme dismay on her face. I knew I would be getting an earful from her later for getting married in her body. Then again, this wasn't really my choice to begin with!

The priest who was residing over the wedding was Porky Pig. The stuttering pig read through the sermons and eventually got to the part where I'm supposed to say "I do". I looked over at Foghorn and then back at the crowd. "Well... I've got only one thing to say..." I then took a deep breath and exhaled. "T-T-T-That's all, folks!" I shouted in a rather cartoonish way. And with that, I hiked up my dress and danced my way off stage, but tripped before I could make my escape. I stumbled and tore my dress on a nearby bush. My entire dress was in tatters, so I pulled off the useless rags revealing my body near-naked body. I was standing there in my bras and pantyhose with my feminine frame on full-display. My large breasts were held in place by my sky-blue bra while a matching pair of blue panties was draped around my lower body.

The audience gasped at my near-naked appearance. The gasps of the audience were soon replaced by wolf-whistles. Lola joined in on the whistling while at the same time shouting: "Nice butt!" I grumbled as Loghorn walked up to me. He was surprised, but happily draped his wing over me to cover me. "Ah say, feeling a little drafty there, Jamla?" I nodded. "I do feel a little drafty, yes!" Just then, Porky's ears perked up as soon as I mentioned the words, "I do". The pig smiled and said, "May you two be bound forever in holy matrimony, you may now kiss the bride!" Oh no, what have I done?! I accidentally said the two words I didn't want to say.

Foghorn then bent over and pressed his beak against my wrinkly monkey lips in an attempt to kiss me. Lola laughed like crazy as the bird smooched my simian muzzle. After smooching, I sputtered and gagged while Foghorn scooped me up in his arms. He patted my huge rump with his chicken wing as he carried me off to a wedding limo. Before we could enter the limo though, we were stopped by Lola. The bunny-headed monkey smiled and wiggled her tiny pink nose around. "I wish you two a great marriage and a great honeymoon!"

I glared at the bunny-headed monkey. "Darn it, Lola, I'll get you back for this!" Lola grinned mischievously, bent over, and whispered in my ear. "Don't worry, I'll come back and get my body in a few weeks. In the meantime, enjoy your time as a darling wife!" I growled at the bunny as Foghorn carried me into the vehicle with his wing still draped around me. He sat me on the leathery seats of the limo as my massive behind rubbed against the leather of the seat below me. Foghorn smiled as he sat beside me and wrapped his arm around my back. I sighed as the limo driver opened the back hatch of the driver's compartment.

The driver stuck his head out of the hatch, revealing that he was the legendary cartoon character, Bugs Bunny! The grey-furred bunny smiled and nibbled on a carrot. "Alright, docs, our next stop is Albuquerque!" Bugs then stepped on the gas as the limo powered on and started driving down the street at a breakneck speed. Luckily, cartoon characters were nigh-indestructible when it came to riding in vehicles, so I wasn't too worried. I knew it was going to suck that I would have to be a wife to this silly rooster. Oh well, in a way this was mostly my fault. I've learned my lesson: Never steal a cartoon character's body!
What happens when Jam ends up in the land of cartoon characters and head-swaps with Lola? Shenanigans, that's what! This is a story that's been a while in the making. :) The art is done by :icononatart: who drew it up in his stream one day. Thanks to Onat for this superb artwork. Support his art, because it is some really awesome stuff! The story itself is a bit on the goofy side, I went for more of a silly cartoony aesthetic. It's a pretty long one too, which is why I split into two chapters.

Jam is the property of myself, Lola, Foghorn Leghorn, Bugs Bunny, The Mystical B-Ball and Porky Pig are the property of Warner Bros, artwork is the property of Onartart, and the coyote is just something I made up on the fly. :D (Best thing about cartoon coyotes is that they are mostly interchangeable)

BTW, the sketch was cropped out from ONAT's complete sketch stream (Warning: NSFW): monkey-scientist.deviantart.co…
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:iconpheagle-adler:
Pheagle-Adler Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016
Say, I say, them two make such a lovely couple
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Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
*Blushes* You really think so? :D
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Pheagle-Adler Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016
Sure
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Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
D'awwww, you're da best. :)
*Hugs you, right before head-swapping you with Foghorn* :D
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Pheagle-Adler Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016
What....you know that makes us a couple don't you
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Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
*Hangs off your rooster wing* Yep! :D
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:iconpheagle-adler:
Pheagle-Adler Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016
O.o
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:iconmonkey-scientist:
Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Well, people already ship the two of us anyways. :D
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DreadedOne131 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016
Bugs was pleased with the swap? I wonder if he's Lola's girlfriend now XD

Bugs doing what he does
www.huffingtonpost.com/julie-t…
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Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Bugs is very in touch with his feminine side, that is true. :D
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Bronyknight4 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016
I would like to see a sequel to this. It must be very difficult hide and then run in a wedding dress.
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Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Well, once you rip it up a bit, you can have a fair bit of mobility. Besides, the dress operates on toon logic. :D
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shadowinvader0 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I've never read a head-swap story, so I do admire the creativity. Your grammar and spelling is marvelous, but I do have some things I'd like to point out that aren't really negative, nut can be worked on. Each character seems to have a very high sense of grammar as well, whereas in the real cartoon, they do not. The Looney Toons characters tend to use simpler words. That, and your descriptions tend to repeat themselves a lot, where you could be using a different form of wording that wouldn't feel as repetitive.
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Monkey-Scientist Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for your critique! I'll try to work on character dialogue and description repetition in the future.
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