So, I'm working on the photos from my second shoot with Melanie, my first model with my DSLR. I think I've progressed well technically, I didn't wind up with as many out of focus shots and I"m having a hell of a time picking out my favorites to post here. Of course Melanie makes that even harder by being gorgeous and a fantastic model. We got lucky with some really cool locations as well. We shot at Heritage Park which is a collection of preserved Victorian style buildings in Mission Hills San Diego. The best buildings were a synagogue and the small room with a desk an chair. I'd love any critiques of the photos to see how others feel I've progressed.