A piece of pie page sixteen

Im back, sorry about the wait. I actually promised someone i'd post this yesterday so again i'll find a way to make it up to you guys.

I've still got a butt load of school work left to do but as im off till thursday I plan on getting Rainbow/Fluttershys bit done so I can have the comic completed by sometime next week... my plans never seem to pan out though... I MUST WORK HARDER, GAAAAAAI SEEEEEEEENSEEEEEEEEEEEI!!!

Quick note: That is supposed to be Lilly, Derpy hooves (ditzy doo) and Carrot top (golden harvest) in the bottom left panel.

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