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EDIT 7-3-15:  Oh my god, this is literally the worst thing I've written in my entire life. I wrote this when I was 14, and I'm 18 now. Kill me.

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EDIT 9-20-14:  THE OFFICIAL SEQUEL IS OUT SO YOU ALL CAN STOP BOTHERING ME ABOUT IT: fav.me/d7zvvn6

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EDIT 11-23-12: I HATE THIS. I HATE THIS SO MUCH. It's OLD, It's SUCKY, and I WANT TO KILL IT. But, I won't. Just to remind myself that I can't write Creepypastas for shit.


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Asjkl. This is my first Creepypasta.

Sorry that it sucks.

And sorry for not replying to comments...


I didn't really do any spellcheck.

...Maybe I should draw a picture of insane Noodle...
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Mario123311's avatar

I know this story has aged like milk for the most part, but the general premise of your neglected dog waiting for you and being in a depressing state is a really sad one. It’s part of why I always tend to think about leaving my Nintendogs alone all these years: They are probably just computer data and code, but you can’t help but feel guilty.


Genuinely think you could write a story like this that’s just as sad without all the unnecessary gore.