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Creepypasta - Paralyzed
Pokemon Diamond. My most beloved game ever, the one I had beaten within days of getting it. I was well on my way to catching every Pokemon, only a few left. Whenever I was bored, I'd whip out my old DS and have a wander around with the Poke Radar, looking for the ones that had escaped my attention. It was taking a really long time, but I refused to cheat, and I didn't want to trade for it either. That just left the old fashioned way - good old man power.
It was roughly 1am. I have quite severe insomnia, making it impossible for me to sleep some nights. It was times like these that I would play Diamond to tire out my brain, and half the time
Creepypasta- Little Red Rabbit
I'm what you might call a Pokemon fanatic. I have what must be a million cards (no doubles), many figurines and plushies and I own or have owned all of the games at some point or another. I've owned and trained every Pokemon available, even the event exclusive ones thanks to a lot of bribing. Well, all except two. One very, very simple Pokemon that isn't uncommon in Eterna forest, and its evolution.
Buneary and Loppuny.
Those two Pokemon are my favourites ever, but whenever I encounter Buneary it either faints, knocks out all my Pokemon or I run out of Pokeballs. The darn thing hates my guts, and I have no idea why. And of course, the only
BaD eGg...?
Bad Egg.... a term that we all know; and one that some of us fear. But... is the egg itself really bad...? What makes the strange and glitchy pokemon inside so awful...? Aren't all pokemon created equally...?
Or... could it be something more...? What's the reason for the strange pokemon within the confines of the so-called "Bad Egg?"
I....believe I may have found the reason for these... these... things shrouded in mystery....
And it isn't anything that's wrong with the egg.... No, it has to be the fault of the Trainer....
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"Here's your egg. Take good care of it
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EDIT 7-3-15: Oh my god, this is literally the worst thing I've written in my entire life. I wrote this when I was 14, and I'm 18 now. Kill me.
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EDIT 9-20-14: THE OFFICIAL SEQUEL IS OUT SO YOU ALL CAN STOP BOTHERING ME ABOUT IT: fav.me/d7zvvn6
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~EDIT 11-23-12: I HATE THIS. I HATE THIS SO MUCH. It's OLD, It's SUCKY, and I WANT TO KILL IT. But, I won't. Just to remind myself that I can't write Creepypastas for shit.
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Asjkl. This is my first Creepypasta.
Sorry that it sucks.
And sorry for not replying to comments...
I didn't really do any spellcheck.
...Maybe I should draw a picture of insane Noodle...
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I know this story has aged like milk for the most part, but the general premise of your neglected dog waiting for you and being in a depressing state is a really sad one. It’s part of why I always tend to think about leaving my Nintendogs alone all these years: They are probably just computer data and code, but you can’t help but feel guilty.
Genuinely think you could write a story like this that’s just as sad without all the unnecessary gore.