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Nintendogs: Lab and Friends. Such a sweet, innocent game.

I had gotten the game years ago. I was so excited.

I had bought a red Cavalier K.C. Spaniel when I first started my file.
I named her Noodle. She was so sweet.

I would spend hours with her. Training my sweet little puppy. Feeding her, bathing her. I played the game almost non-stop when I got the cartridge that one cold day.
I had gotten many other dogs on the game. But only three stayed with me at all times.

Noodle, along with Shelly, a Miniature Dachshund, and Draco,
a German Shepherd.

They would cheer me up when I was down.
They could make me happy even during my darkest hours.


I loved them so much. They were my best friends.

As silly as it sounds, it was almost as if they were...alive.

But, time went by. I was slowly growing out of Nintendogs.
It was almost as if they could sense that I was going to leave them.

I was starting to play different games. Get on the computer more often.
I was starting to watch more TV.

Slowly but surely, Nintendogs had been forgotten.

Replaced. Replaced with bigger, and better things.




Years later, I was digging through my games.

Not to play them, no. To sell them.
I didn't want to sell any of my games, but I had to. My mom wanted money.

I froze as my hands brushed against a small game cartridge.

I blinked, picking it up and dusting it off.
Nintendogs! I smiled. Boy, I had missed this game.

The last time I had played it was before my best friend left me.
I stood up, still holding the cartridge.

My mom was out of the house at the time, so I was free to play it.
I grabbed my DSi, and sat down on my bed.

I pushed the small square into the system, a small "click" echoing throughout my room.

I stared at the start-up icon.

It looked...odd.

There was no cute little Lab puppy on it. It was just a completely red screen.

I shrugged it off. Just an error. Nothing too major.

I tapped the screen, and watched the icon disappear, as it faded out into the game.

It showed the normal Nintendo logo against a white screen. But the writing on the bottom half was gone.
Was this normal? Yes, it had to be. It was just my mind playing tricks on me.

But instead of a normal happy "bark" welcoming me, it was just silence.

My eyes widened at what I saw.

Instead of seeing the normal happy beach scene, the sand was covered with bones, and internal organs of...what it seemed to be, other dogs.

The sky was blood red, and more bones and other severed body parts scattered the ocean, making it red also.

Swallowing hard, I looked around for my dogs.

I almost wished I hadn't.

Almost the minute I started looking, I heard a soft whining noise.

Noodle lay there, covered in blood.

My mouth went dry as realization hit me.


The bones and body parts were parts of Draco and Shelly.


This was not normal. Not at all. My eyes were filled with tears as I frantically held my thumb on the "Power" button.

"The DS System Cannot Be Turned Off At This Time."

W-what? What did it mean?

I shuddered, tossing my DSi across the room.
It made a loud thudding noise as it hit the wall.

I made a dash for the door, putting my hand on the knob.
I jiggled it. It wasn't moving.

And my door didn't have a lock.

I opened my mouth to scream, but nothing came out.
Sobbing silently, I pressing my back against the door, closing my eyes.
After a few minutes of sobbing, I calmed down.

Everything was silent.

Maybe my DSi had turned itself off? Maybe I broke it?
I didn't care. I just wanted out.

An icy chill went up my spine as I heard a few barks coming from my DSi.

Hesitantly, I slowly walked towards it.

Noodle was standing in front of the screen, holding a leash in her mouth.
"Noodle would like to take you for a walk."

I quivered. It had never said anything like that before.
I shakily picked up my DSi, getting a good look at Noodle.

Her eyes were gone. Nothing left but her eye sockets.

Blood covered her face, and some skin and fur was missing.

Sobbing, I tapped the "No" option on screen.

The screen faded to white, leading me to the route screen.

It looked normal, besides for the route ink. It was blood red.

It automatically made it's own route.

"Is this the route you'll take?"

I frantically tapped the "No" option.

It didn't listen.

Noodle and I immediately started to walk.

I stared at the screen in horror.

All of the buildings were on fire.

Body parts of humans, and dogs were scattered all over the sidewalk.

Noodle stopped at a dead puppy, and started to eat it.

I continued sobbing as she dragged me through the terrifying scene.

"Arf arf!" Noodle barked.

Oh no. Another dog.

The screen faded to white for a few seconds, before showing a new screen.

"Maggie is out for a walk."

Instead of a cute little Yorkie jumping around, It was a decaying skeleton, with still some rotting flesh on it.

"Chantal has some stern words for you."

I gulped, clicking the red arrow.

"Your dogs are dead, Lydia. Everyone's dogs are dead. It's all your fault..."

I watched in terror as Noodle lunged forward, gnawing at the dead body of Maggie.

"It's time to say goodbye to Chantal. Noodle doesn't seem to like Maggie very much."

The screen faded out, and back into Noodle and I walking.

After a few minutes of walking, she barked once, running out of sight. She came back with a white and red present.

"Noodle must have found something. She's bringing it to you!"

"You got a dog's skull!"

Noodle excitedly pawed at the screen.

"This skull belonged to a local neighborhood puppy.

Type: ---"


I continued to cry silently as Noodle dragged me through more terror.


It seemed like it took forever, but we were soon back home.

I finally managed to open my mouth and talk.
"Why are you doing this to me?" I choked out, my voice scratchy.

Noodle stared up and the screen.

"Noodle has waited three years for you to come back."

I gulped.

"...But you never came..."

Suddenly, what was left of Noodle's  fur and skin slowly started to melt off.

"I'll make you suffer..."

Soon, it was just a skeleton left.

"...Just like I did."

And just like that, the Skeleton collapsed to the ground.

My DSi turned off.

Sobbing hysterically, I ripped the game out of my system, and tossed it in the trash.

Suddenly, my door slowly creaked open.

Without thinking twice, I bolted out of the room.



I never wanted to play Nintendogs again.

EDIT 7-3-15:  Oh my god, this is literally the worst thing I've written in my entire life. I wrote this when I was 14, and I'm 18 now. Kill me.

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EDIT 9-20-14:  THE OFFICIAL SEQUEL IS OUT SO YOU ALL CAN STOP BOTHERING ME ABOUT IT: fav.me/d7zvvn6

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EDIT 11-23-12: I HATE THIS. I HATE THIS SO MUCH. It's OLD, It's SUCKY, and I WANT TO KILL IT. But, I won't. Just to remind myself that I can't write Creepypastas for shit.


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Asjkl. This is my first Creepypasta.

Sorry that it sucks.

And sorry for not replying to comments...


I didn't really do any spellcheck.

...Maybe I should draw a picture of insane Noodle...
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:iconboringguyseth:
boringguyseth Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2018  Student Writer
i like this story.
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:iconopalcat2004:
opalcat2004 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2018  Student Artist
I owe so much to this story,,,,I made my DA account to comment on this! Not to mention on my favorite Nintendogs cartridge I have a doggo named Noodle!!
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:iconmailie5:
mailie5 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2018  Professional Artist
Wow your story was creepy as hell. 10/10
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:iconkittyann325:
Kittyann325 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gosh. I have the game...haven't played it in a long time either....*gulp*
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:icondagaminglama:
DaGamingLama Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*stares at the name* yeah no id like to keep one of my child hood memories pure
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:iconponyfnafkittypainter:
PonyFNaFKittyPainter Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CAN I WRITE A SEQUEL

PLZz
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:iconsugarygalaxy:
sugarygalaxy Featured By Owner Edited Jul 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dunno why, but I burst out laughing at the "Oh no. Another dog." part. It sounds so monotonous omg OMG MOAR POEMS! 
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:iconkodiastar:
KodiaStar Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Call me a baby, but this was scary as FRICK
Never getting that frickin game
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:iconstarpelt-chatlands:
Starpelt-chatlands Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
Man, this is actually really good!
It creeped me out a bit .3.
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:iconopaiescent:
OpaIescent Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU wrote this?!?!
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:iconfreeingmycreativity:
FreeingMyCreativity Featured By Owner Edited Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I've read this before somewhere....
wait- It was a narrated version- damn
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:icontmntandsakuralover12:
TMNTandSakuralover12 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NIGHTMARES.

This isn't too bad, considering you wrote it at 14, but it gives me the creeps.
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:iconohheyapencil:
OhHeyAPencil Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
2spoopy4me
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:iconsweaterkitty-fluff:
Sweaterkitty-Fluff Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 I never knew you wrote this, I really liked this pasta when I was first getting into Creepypasta a few years back!
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:iconfnafsfoxythefox:
fnafsfoxythefox Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god look:www.youtube.com/watch?v=FAa4QK… your pasta is a video :D also when i hear Draco I think harry potter
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:iconchicafazchickenplz:
chicafazchickenplz Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
This kinda scary
but if it were a true story then..
sHAT.
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:iconponyfnafkittypainter:
PonyFNaFKittyPainter Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So, technically Pou with a twist on DSi???

Also I cried at the ''The bones and body parts were parts of Draco and Shelly.''

What made me cry was Draco the German Shepherd. I own a German Shepherd, 11 years old, weak, but very close to me. 



K I'll go get some Nintendogs.
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:icontigerdoesdatart:
TigerDoesDatArt Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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:iconwingblackpaw:
wingblackpaw Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
i like it, not as creepy as usual creepypastas but i like it
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:iconthe-golden-suit:
The-Golden-Suit Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this ;u;
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:icontherainbowcontroller:
TheRainbowController Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is actualy good and original so i have no mean comments to leave here xD
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:iconolivewriter:
OliveWriter Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you kidding me this is going to give me nIGHTMARES.
This is the reason I'm afraid of games like this. The dogs look sweet and innocent but give them the chance and tHEY WILL BETRAY YOU.
I actually thought this was a pretty good creepypasta. The door locking didn't make much sense, but the rest genuinely gave me chills. Well done. ^^
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:icondameyyoureastar:
dameyyoureastar Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Idk i thought ot was good...
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:icontanklorge:
tanklorge Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2015
its seems like that Pikachu doll creepypasta with dogs its ok koili
www.youtube.com/watch?v=FAa4QK… its a reveiw that says the creepypasta isnt that bad and pretty well written
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:iconsilverfiresunpelt:
SilverfireSunpelt Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
HOLY CRAP!! I SAW SOG READ THIS ON YOUTUBE! I remember laughing at it. Cause let's be honest, who the heck can be scared of the adorable dogs from Nintendogs?!
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:iconsilverwarrior2344:
silverwarrior2344 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welp I'm never playing Nintendo dogs again. QUQ
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:icontheonefreepyro:
TheOneFreePyro Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
God dammit, I REALLY want to hate on this (you told us to, after all!) but after reading this, I dunno. It's got a few clichés, like the "Oh, stuffs not working like it should. Probably just a glitch." thing, but overall, I think we can all agree we have read worse. *cough cough Sonic.exe cough*
I'd give this 6/10 bloody puppies. You know, if I was actually a reviewer.
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:iconfruitcake40:
fruitcake40 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist
this reminds me of BRVR
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:iconpianotrickster:
PianoTrickster Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
ikr
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:iconfruitcake40:
fruitcake40 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist
exactly! i thought i was the  only one!!
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:iconpianotrickster:
PianoTrickster Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I loved Pokemon Dead Channel =4D
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:iconfruitcake40:
fruitcake40 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist
Lol
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:iconpianotrickster:
PianoTrickster Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a huge creepypasta fan
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:iconkattatoad:
Kattatoad Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank god I only have Chihuahua and friends..
And i think Dachshund and friends...
BUT I HAVENT PLAYED THEM IN YEARS OMG XD
I also have the new 3ds one called Nintendogs and Cats.
I havent played that one in a year..
OMFG
Anyways I think this isnt bad at all, heck im going to read the sequel now.
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:iconslimy-pennies:
Slimy-Pennies Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WAIT A MOMENT

I REMEMBER HEARING THIS SOMEWHERE BEFORE

LIKE, YEARS AGO

KOILI FUCKING WROTE THIS

HOLY SHIT

*it's a small world starts playing*
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:iconbound-to-the-ground:
Bound-To-The-Ground Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh. Wasn't that bad. I can't write horror for the life of me.
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:iconmousey-admin:
Mousey-Admin Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
g8 m8 I r8 8/8 no h8
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:icondoodedoo:
DooDeDoo Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Now I don't want to play Nintendo Dogs. Great.
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:icontiboleka:
tiboleka Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Other than a few minor cliches, this is a really nice creepypasta.
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:iconthatmagicmuffin:
ThatMagicMuffin Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry, this isn't too bad. :3
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:iconpancakemaniac:
PancakeManiac Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist
OMG this is actually really creepy! great job! :)
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:iconchocohonut:
chocohonut Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student General Artist
O my god...
I extremely like how you got a subject to use that is so cheerful and cute into something that will make everyone have nightmares...
(You know, I used to play Nintendogs....But I stopped playing...)
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:iconshadedragneel:
ShadeDragneel Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS ISN'T BAD! TO ME IT ACTUALLY WAS SCARY LIKE A PROPER CREEPYPASTA!
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:iconcandymeowz:
CandyMeowz Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student
I also had a red Cavalier K.C. Spaniel...

Well i'm never going to play Nintendogs ever again.
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:iconmister-eeg:
mister-eeg Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
For every dog lover who reads this..







..the feels.
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:iconprincessskyler:
PrincessSkyler Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wtf this is AMAZING! Dont be down on yourself hun!
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:iconisabellancrazy:
IsabellaNCrazy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015   Artist
I swear to God the way this started out, I thought it would be "NintenDogs is love, NintenDogs is life"
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:iconspiritsnowy:
SpiritSnowy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student General Artist
Darn it.scared me to death I tried to put on music worked a little
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:iconariellkevin:
ariellkevin Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Whoa, that was cool. >v<
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:iconawesomekittehlove:
Awesomekittehlove Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
i'm gonna go cry in a corner questioning my insanity.
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